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Post by b4sunset on May 19, 2011 6:03:03 GMT -5
night for rent , without sleep eyes bang the clock~ blistered bed puffing expired nicotine :: tetractys express a complete thought, using 20 syllables. 5 lines with a syllable count of 1 / 2 / 3 /4/ 10...the "1 syllable" line must be a proper, interesting word.
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 19, 2011 8:06:00 GMT -5
great job ...I love these poems
one thing I noticed...line 3 has 4 syllables, but who cares
thanks for the fine post
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Post by b4sunset on May 19, 2011 20:04:02 GMT -5
Yayyy, right you are, lisa... modified it.. thanks!
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Post by Betty on May 20, 2011 6:32:26 GMT -5
fantastic job Nenette, enjoy your award and thanks for posting and sharing!
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