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Post by frankievon on Nov 15, 2011 7:46:42 GMT -5
Moonlit Ravine, Shadowed but gleam, A high observation, Stand still isolation, Atlas I feel what is free...
Moonlit Ravine, Impervious stream, Metaphysical epiphany, Cerebral Infinity, Mind wanders To a vastly degree...
Moonlit Ravine, Alluringly keen, Spectrum so lucid, Away from the putrid, My Darling bestowed this to me...
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Post by johan on Nov 15, 2011 11:01:11 GMT -5
Your poetry is very interesting, great work my friend.
Johan
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Post by michaelgallatin on Nov 15, 2011 11:51:49 GMT -5
Nice to have you at Echoes! Enjoyed this, rather like the short, if you'll excuse me somewhat clipped, style. Descriptive but succinct. And I really enjoy the idea of "getting away from the putrid" and finding some beauty and peace in a moonlit ravine. Take care, Mike
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 15, 2011 12:24:01 GMT -5
to Echoes excellent write, I look forward to more from you! thanks for joining my site
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Post by purplespirit on Nov 15, 2011 12:58:18 GMT -5
A fine poem and enjoyable advice, thank you. Welcome here, hope to read more from you. Ulla xx
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