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Post by Seashellstarz on Dec 6, 2004 17:42:14 GMT -5
Everything will be Eventually foriven, Eventually forgotten.
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Post by Seashellstarz on Dec 6, 2004 17:44:07 GMT -5
This is my first haiku so please don't laugh at me! I wrote this a while ago but still haven't decided on the title. Anyone can think of any?
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Post by Eddie on Dec 6, 2004 19:34:32 GMT -5
Hi Shellz, Nice first try Shellz, typically haiku is untitled in the second line you have a typo, it should read forgiven ;D
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Dec 6, 2004 22:31:42 GMT -5
Hey Shellz, Very good for your first one ;D Yes, Eddie is correct haiku is almost never titled
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Post by Bob on Dec 7, 2004 5:21:18 GMT -5
Very good Shellz Yes, haiku is never titled and usually the sentences are never capitalized. "everything will be eventually foriven, eventually forgotten" Nice first try ;D
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Post by Toni on Dec 7, 2004 9:28:25 GMT -5
I agree with the rest, it's a great first try I look forward to more from you
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Post by Seashellstarz on Dec 7, 2004 15:44:58 GMT -5
Thanks, all . It must seem weird somewhat to have more than 70 of many types of poems written but without even one haiku.
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Dec 7, 2004 16:56:51 GMT -5
I know what you mean Shellz, I have written over a 1000 poems in the past five years and just started writing haiku this year
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Post by Seashellstarz on Dec 7, 2004 17:40:51 GMT -5
Wow: 1000 poems! You must publish a book!!!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Dec 8, 2004 5:50:38 GMT -5
Hi Shellz,
I am working on a collection of my poems now which may or may not include haiku, but finding a publisher is another story But I am going to put every effort into getting this book done and published! It's my number one goal
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Post by Seashellstarz on Dec 8, 2004 15:49:20 GMT -5
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