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Post by Jay on Jan 12, 2005 4:57:40 GMT -5
walking hand and hand under moonlight's glow dreading the coming of dawn
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 12, 2005 5:39:41 GMT -5
wonderful haiku Jay for posting
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Post by Helen on Jan 12, 2005 5:52:17 GMT -5
beautifully written Jay
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Post by Toni on Jan 13, 2005 19:52:48 GMT -5
wonderful haiku, Jay
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Post by Seashellstarz on Jan 13, 2005 23:00:29 GMT -5
:)Beautiful imagery! I am wondering, why the "dreading?"
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Post by Jay on Jan 14, 2005 4:38:50 GMT -5
thanks everyone ;D Shellz, I chose "dreading" because I felt the character in the haiku was enjoying his time with his love and the allure of moonlight and did not want the good time and the aura to end with the coming of daylight:) Hope this makes ense
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Post by Jay on Jan 17, 2005 2:36:16 GMT -5
Thanks for the Gold Star Award Lisa, Bri, Sharon and Tina
Doing the happydance
I am so very honored ;D
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Post by Bob on Jan 17, 2005 21:41:51 GMT -5
congrats, great haiku
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Post by Seashellstarz on Jan 23, 2005 22:18:20 GMT -5
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