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Post by immusie on Jul 8, 2008 13:02:32 GMT -5
Nature by Your SideResting my soul upon visions of delight I relish the beauty of hill crest moon. Tickling my fancy is life's dreaming tune thrilling in cosmos dish dipping sight. Shadows reflecting in still waters boon, lifting my minds eye to telling time cliffs. Sun aims a beam through steaming pools of mist winging into a niche are baby loons. Scenic art creates a heart soothing psalm, off in the distance a mountainous pride. East meets West as God's Will was meant to be, natures laws are often met with rift. Wind whispers softly to mans rattled ear, His joys and Grace are always by your side.
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Post by rainbowrider on Jul 8, 2008 20:16:56 GMT -5
As lovely a poem as I ever read,
RR
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Post by heart2heart on Jul 9, 2008 0:06:37 GMT -5
Yes lovely poem, with stunningly befitting picture, mailing you ! Katriona
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Post by aquarianstar on Jul 9, 2008 17:27:00 GMT -5
Ah Musie, you scare me with your talent... I'd wish you luck in this contest, but the beauty in this piece doesn't suggest you need it!!! Great work
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Post by immusie on Jul 10, 2008 5:28:11 GMT -5
Thank you all for the kind comments...I wish you all the best of luck as well......musie
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Post by b4sunset on Jul 10, 2008 14:54:39 GMT -5
My, my.. you amaze me musie friend with this stunning piece.. i am disarmed!
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Post by Eddie on Jul 12, 2008 18:23:54 GMT -5
amazing!
much luck to you!
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Post by rrw on Jul 13, 2008 15:15:47 GMT -5
I knew I had commented on this already, but didn't know where! Hee! Here's my original comment: Interesting that you are exploring the sonnet concept. Your love of nature as a "feast" for the eye as well as the soul reads well through this. It's like a dessert, so to speak, rich in colors and flavors. This may well be your resting place for your artistic expression...
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Post by johan on Jul 13, 2008 22:40:45 GMT -5
One word my friend, wonderful. Good luck.
Johan
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Post by stephen on Jul 15, 2008 6:23:23 GMT -5
Nice sonnet style poem. Not Petrarchan. Your rhymes and syllables are off several places I'm afraid. SL
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Post by immusie on Jul 18, 2008 19:21:13 GMT -5
My, my.. you amaze me musie friend with this stunning piece.. i am disarmed! Oh b4...your comment of being disarmed wowed me! As I don't believe I have ever disarmed anyone before....Thank you so much for the wonderful complimnent my friend....musie
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Post by immusie on Jul 18, 2008 19:22:17 GMT -5
Thank you Eddie...however as you see the comment that rrw made, I did drop this out of the contest as I learned quickly that it did not meet the criteria...once again, I thank you all for and commenting.....musie
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