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Post by cdlight on Feb 24, 2009 15:21:28 GMT -5
Ok...try to write a 10-lined poem using the number of the line in the line or a word that sounds the same. If you read through your poem you should have 1-10... I posted one below... Example of words you can use one, won two, too, to three, four, fore, for five six, sick's seven eight, ate nine ten, tin (if you're from the south they sound the same  Have fun... CD |
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Post by sunny on Feb 24, 2009 22:00:39 GMT -5
Ok...try to write a 10-lined poem using the number of the line in the line or a word that sounds the same. Example one, won two, too, to three, four, fore, for five six, sick's seven eight, ate nine ten, tin (if you're from the south they sound the same Have fun... CD CD... you are so much fun! you make the night too short! haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa not enough time for me to write! haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa can you make the night a little longer?! haaaaaaaaaaaa hold the dawn... tell the dawn don't come too soon... haaaaaaaaaaaa... this reminds me a very pretty Chinese song " Tell the Dawn Please don't come to soon" ( my English translation...) heeeeeeeeee... it is sooooooooooo pretty! ( in the famous derector" Xiu KU" move==" The Ghost" main theme song.. anyway... enough of that... let me try. |
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Post by sunny on Feb 24, 2009 22:35:02 GMT -5
Ok...try to write a 10-lined poem using the number of the line in the line or a word that sounds the same. Example one, won two, too, to three, four, fore, for five six, sick's seven eight, ate nine ten, tin (if you're from the south they sound the same Have fun... CD CD... my English is not that good.. if I wirte it wrong... you would excuse me right?  because this one need good English!!! CD,  it is so hard for me! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I get lost in the NIGHT, NINE
i sew in the WING, WIND
see a big BIRD, BURB
talk to the FOX, FOGS
I run to the RIVER, WEAVER
have a deep SIGH, SITE
then I jump to the SEA, SEE
try to TRACE, CHASE
and to RACE, RAISE
the SUN, SON.
How is this CD??? |
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Post by cdlight on Feb 25, 2009 0:56:53 GMT -5
It's a work all on it's own, Sunny. I guess I wasn't clear as to how to write one.
I'll repost later with a poem that shows what I mean...sorry your night was so short.
CD
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Post by cdlight on Feb 25, 2009 2:21:25 GMT -5
The Gas Guzzler
I remember one day with clarity
A road trip to see my family
In the three hours passed
We’d stopped six times for gas
Five minutes remained or so we believed
Expected arrival was six or so
My car was on “E” seven miles ago
And the gas guzzler ate
At a nine M.P.G. rate
Took ten trips of gas to be good to go
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Post by sunny on Feb 25, 2009 22:33:50 GMT -5
It's a work all on it's own, Sunny. I guess I wasn't clear as to how to write one. I'll repost later with a poem that shows what I mean...sorry your night was so short. CD Thank you CD! ok... I see you post one there... I will go read it ok.. thanks CD. I am just kidding about the night... don't worry about it. in fact, I am happy that I spent most of the night in poetry! haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.... that makes me happy CD! but thank you for your kindness saying! kind thoughts that counts, thank you! CD, the song I have mention this morning is very pretty... I really hope if you have time future days and go to listent to it... I find two links here for you... ok. www.d-addicts.com/forum/viewtopic_34758.htmwww.d-addicts.com/forum/viewtopic_34758.htm - 154k - Cached - Similar pages - Opening Theme - Daniel Chan - Qian Nu You Hun
- Ending Theme - Daniel Chan
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Post by sunny on Feb 25, 2009 22:43:15 GMT -5
The Gas Guzzler I remember one day with clarity A road trip to see my family In the three hours passed We’d stopped six times for gas Five minutes remained or so we believed Expected arrival was six or so My car was on “E” seven miles ago And the gas guzzler ateAt a nine M.P.G. rate Took ten trips of gas to be good to go this is very good CD and it feels very fun too! I like it a lot! ok... I go try one ok... now |
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Post by sunny on Feb 25, 2009 23:24:21 GMT -5
 I recall one of my summer day long ago friends are together to meet in home after dinner we drink three rounds toast grateful for we all sharing the same tones Five of us sit around before a small piano melodies sound gently through six windows Violin friend is playing the " Seventh Snow" Eight candle lights flickering as music floats we sing songs all night and all day that follows tend to stay by each other as the day gets old image:http://i33.photobucket.com |
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Post by immusie on Feb 26, 2009 17:52:22 GMT -5
WoW...well this one's different CD...will have to come back my friend.....musie
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because this one need good English!!! 
it is so hard for me! 
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
