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Post by b4sunset on Mar 1, 2009 4:12:57 GMT -5
Great contributions from all fine poets! kudos to lisa, sunny, sara, bridge! from me to you: april
like benign clouds
straying silver--lined threads
my arms grow wings of promises
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Post by sunny on Mar 1, 2009 7:32:44 GMT -5
Great contributions from all fine poets! kudos to lisa, sunny, sara, bridge! from me to you: april
like benign clouds
straying silver--lined threads
my arms grow wings of promises
contenteveryone here is soooooooooooooooooooooooooo great! Lisa, b4, Jack, sara, bridge Serriea,..I couldn't remember all the names...great talent and sharing! hello B4 Pal, you are so good and wake me up immediately in such Sunday morning! I want to sleepppppppppppppppp! (I guess I got some small flu,,, head fuzzy abd heavy..)haaaaaaaaaaaaaa then I hear your poem is mumbling,,,,, haaaaaaaaaaaaaa... then my soul shouts at me UP!!!! wake up!!! hhhaaaaa here I am hug you and write one down to follow you too!  March
my thoughts scatter
melting with the fain snow
reveal the layer spouts beneath
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Post by b4sunset on Mar 1, 2009 10:39:19 GMT -5
What a delightful way to wake up, sunny pal! go, go go! tremendous gift! beautiful picture you have here.... YES! |
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Post by Billy on Mar 1, 2009 12:32:10 GMT -5
great cinquians, Lisa!  Bridge I'll be on the lookout for yours! Sunny, good poems but as bridge pointed out they are not cinquains, check your syllablel count and they will be fine  Here goes mine: beauty
does not befall
those who have unkind souls
it graces those who exhibit
kindness great job  |
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Post by immusie on Mar 1, 2009 15:37:55 GMT -5
GREAT ONES Guy's!
I have not done one of these in a long time...so bare with me and tell me if this works???
Raindrops
fall from dark clouds
crack of thunder rolling
spring brings a breath of fresh air in
rainfall
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Post by sunny on Mar 2, 2009 0:30:20 GMT -5
Hi Sunny, I like yours but they are cinquains because your syllable count is off, a cinquain is 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, and yours are 1, 3 ,5 ,8, 3 and 3 ,4, 6, 10, 1... oops! I am so sorry that I have not read this UNtill now... each time when I come I just hurry hurry and more hurry and just fly by very fast to next page... and this is my fault! I AM SO SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!bridge  SORRY! bridge:'( SORRY! bridge:'( now I will go to change all my wittings OK! if I still not right, I will go fix them till they are right OK?! thank you very much bridge!for my apology, I buy you a Chinese tea!  and some wine,  and some food, a  nd some FLOWERS  TO SAY SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BRIDGE!!![/color] images:http://photobucket.com |
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Post by sunny on Mar 2, 2009 0:51:10 GMT -5
What a delightful way to wake up, sunny pal! go, go go! tremendous gift! beautiful picture you have here.... YES!  hey b4 pal! thank you very much for your always encourage me!!! without you , I don't know how much energy left in me that want to climb up any mountains! or even just take a simple walk on the road!!!! haaaaaaaaaa let's drink a little! I want to get drunk tonight b4! let's drink all night and we will write many many poems after drunk right!!! |
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Post by sunny on Mar 2, 2009 1:33:18 GMT -5
great cinquians, Lisa! Bridge I'll be on the lookout for yours! Sunny, good poems but as bridge pointed out they are not cinquains, check your syllablel count and they will be fine Here goes mine: beauty
does not befall
those who have unkind souls
it graces those who exhibit
kindness
thank you very much again and I am sorry for such late reply! |
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Post by b4sunset on Mar 2, 2009 10:25:28 GMT -5
nice, nice billy, musie and the rest.. yes, sunny, can i have chinese tea too? |
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Post by cdlight on Mar 2, 2009 14:43:58 GMT -5
good job everyone...I just got a chance to see this one...never written one before so here goes...
CD
The Truth
Without error
It’s known to make you free
Life all changes when you trust in
Jesus
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Post by immusie on Mar 2, 2009 14:51:53 GMT -5
Thank you b4 for acknowledging the one I posted..much appreciated...glad you liked....
Cd...your's is good, but needs to be a 2, 4, 6, 8, 2
syllable count...so I'm not sure that the 1st 2 words work...? But someone else might say differently....just a suggestion..but maybe you could use the word "spirit"? I don't know...but otherwise this one is a most pleasant one....
Line 1: Noun
Line 2: Description of Noun
Line 3: Action
Line 4: Feeling or Effect
Line 5: Synonym of the initial noun.
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Post by cdlight on Mar 2, 2009 15:35:18 GMT -5
Jesus said...I am the way, the truth, the life; no one cometh unto the father but by me...John 14:6 I guess it's all how you look at it. I see it as a noun CD |
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Post by sunny on Mar 2, 2009 21:22:05 GMT -5
nice, nice billy, musie and the rest.. yes, sunny, can i have chinese tea too? yes, b4! you can have as much as my drink of Chinese tea too! you can have it all and I just go drink some water or wine! ok! |
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Post by Sara on Aug 23, 2009 5:24:37 GMT -5
Great contributions from all fine poets! kudos to lisa, sunny, sara, bridge! from me to you: april
like benign clouds
straying silver--lined threads
my arms grow wings of promises
contentthanks b4!! |
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Post by icee on Aug 24, 2009 22:47:19 GMT -5
thanks so much Brian, Percy and bridge  I really appreciate the read and kind words here is a new one by me, I seem to be in a dark mood these days: a child
taken away
by a gunman’s bullet
young life lost before it ever
began[/color][/size] [/quote] good one, Lisa! we miss you around here. I heard he had a few setbacks. I hope all is going well with your dad now take care |
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all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
