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Post by Alicia on Apr 4, 2010 10:32:51 GMT -5
your poem speaks to me, great job!
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Post by sunny on Apr 4, 2010 12:30:26 GMT -5
i like the image of the words! it is very vivid and alive!
it also holds so much imagination of your tones beyond, very tasteful!
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Post by b4sunset on Apr 4, 2010 12:42:26 GMT -5
Much enjoyed-- the element of style and thoughts on pathos.. great one!
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Post by Betty on Apr 5, 2010 1:21:20 GMT -5
your poem speaks to me, great job!  so much Alicia  |
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Post by Betty on Apr 5, 2010 1:22:46 GMT -5
i like the image of the words! it is very vivid and alive! it also holds so much imagination of your tones beyond, very tasteful! so very much sunny |
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Post by Betty on Apr 5, 2010 1:24:02 GMT -5
Much enjoyed-- the element of style and thoughts on pathos.. great one! so much b4 |
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Post by mark on Apr 5, 2010 1:24:59 GMT -5
Betty, your poem is haunting and so very well written and it is a great read!!
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Post by Betty on Apr 5, 2010 1:30:16 GMT -5
A look to the heart in the soul of times, so well expressed, RR thank you so much rr  |
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Post by Betty on Apr 5, 2010 1:31:52 GMT -5
very soulful write, this is a winner Betty! Hello Harry I really appreciate your comments about my poem |
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Post by Betty on Apr 5, 2010 1:50:23 GMT -5
great poem and title, I surely can relate to this one, good job! many thanks Cyndi |
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Post by Betty on Apr 5, 2010 1:51:25 GMT -5
Betty, your poem is haunting and so very well written and it is a great read!! Mark |
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Post by Billy on Apr 5, 2010 2:01:21 GMT -5
treacherous waters
engulf
a longing soul
rendering it vulnerable
to defeat
hidden within
a callous heart
waits desire
for a comforting
hand
yet, another night
falls without
rescue from these
treacherous
waters
[/size][/b][/center][/quote] you have written a wonderful poem, Betty  |
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Post by Betty on Apr 5, 2010 3:04:42 GMT -5
thanks so much Billy!
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Post by Betty on Apr 5, 2010 4:12:01 GMT -5
I just noticed that I forgot to thank Lola, Joan, Trina, Rico and Dana!! sorry about that oversight and thanks so much for all of your kind thoughts and comments |
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Post by Carin on Apr 5, 2010 9:04:39 GMT -5
wonderful writing, enjoyed the read, thanks for posting!
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so much Alicia 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
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Aug 5, 2021 14:19:11 GMT -5
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