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EDGE OF DARKNESS Apr 21, 2010 23:01:25 GMT -5

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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 21, 2010 23:01:25 GMT -5

EDGE OF DARKNESS

edge of darkness
black night dawn
cold winds thieve
silent waters ripple
echoes softly speak
phantom shadows crawl
elegant moon glows
overhead thunder roars
distant train whistles
cat jowls on fence
edge of darkness
black night dawn

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Last Edit: Apr 22, 2010 4:33:59 GMT -5 by Lisa Arnold

dreams echo within...

Betty Haiku/Short Form Monitor[/size] Posts: 1,477	EDGE OF DARKNESS Apr 21, 2010 23:31:41 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Betty on Apr 21, 2010 23:31:41 GMT -5 great write Lisa, love the picture!

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	EDGE OF DARKNESS Apr 21, 2010 23:41:47 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 21, 2010 23:41:47 GMT -5 thanks Betty!
	dreams echo within...

Helen Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Bright and Polite Posts: 565	EDGE OF DARKNESS Apr 22, 2010 0:22:00 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Helen on Apr 22, 2010 0:22:00 GMT -5 LOVE THIS!! your writing is blessed!
	"Reaching for my goals"

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	EDGE OF DARKNESS Apr 22, 2010 2:47:14 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 22, 2010 2:47:14 GMT -5 Helen
	dreams echo within...

Cherrie Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Loving This Beautiful Life Posts: 1,002	EDGE OF DARKNESS Apr 22, 2010 3:54:16 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Cherrie on Apr 22, 2010 3:54:16 GMT -5 well-done, Lisa!
	"Trying to step out of my own way"

Silent-One Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Riding The Waves Posts: 659	EDGE OF DARKNESS Apr 22, 2010 4:20:47 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Silent-One on Apr 22, 2010 4:20:47 GMT -5 great imagery and tone, an instant favorite of mine, great job! I am off to work, have a great day!
	Remembering where I was, so I will know where I am going...

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	EDGE OF DARKNESS Apr 22, 2010 4:35:32 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 22, 2010 4:35:32 GMT -5 Apr 22, 2010 3:54:16 GMT -5 Cherrie said: well-done, Lisa! so much Cherrie
	dreams echo within...

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	EDGE OF DARKNESS Apr 22, 2010 4:36:44 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 22, 2010 4:36:44 GMT -5 Apr 22, 2010 4:20:47 GMT -5 Silent-One said: great imagery and tone, an instant favorite of mine, great job! I am off to work, have a great day! many thanks dear Harry, you are so kind, love ya you have a nice day too
	dreams echo within...

Sharon Assistant Administrator[/size] Believe and Achieve Posts: 2,430	EDGE OF DARKNESS Apr 22, 2010 5:00:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sharon on Apr 22, 2010 5:00:20 GMT -5 great flow to this one, reads so smoothly...enjoyed every word...good job
	"There's a peace inside us all" - Scott Stapp

Sierra Echoes Family Member Posts: 847	EDGE OF DARKNESS Apr 22, 2010 5:21:40 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sierra on Apr 22, 2010 5:21:40 GMT -5 smooth and easy and laced with a hint of edginess..great job love the pic

Alicia Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Living Life! Posts: 883	EDGE OF DARKNESS Apr 22, 2010 6:17:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Alicia on Apr 22, 2010 6:17:13 GMT -5 :-[well-done I love these lines: "edge of darkness black night dawn cold winds thieve silent waters ripple"
	Last Edit: Apr 22, 2010 6:19:22 GMT -5 by Alicia

percy Echoes Family Member Wading Deep Waters Friend of Echoes Posts: 787	EDGE OF DARKNESS Apr 22, 2010 6:36:56 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by percy on Apr 22, 2010 6:36:56 GMT -5 fine writing here Lisa... these lines stand out in my opinion: "echoes softly speak phantom shadows crawl elegant moon glows"

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	EDGE OF DARKNESS Apr 22, 2010 6:53:06 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 22, 2010 6:53:06 GMT -5 Apr 22, 2010 5:00:20 GMT -5 Sharon said: great flow to this one, reads so smoothly...enjoyed every word...good job thanks so much Sharon, glad you enjoyed the read
	dreams echo within...

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	EDGE OF DARKNESS Apr 22, 2010 6:54:39 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 22, 2010 6:54:39 GMT -5 Apr 22, 2010 5:21:40 GMT -5 Sierra said: smooth and easy and laced with a hint of edginess..great job love the pic Sierra for commenting and for stopping by
	dreams echo within...