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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 22, 2010 6:56:14 GMT -5
:-[well-done  I love these lines: "edge of darkness
black night dawn
cold winds thieve
silent waters ripple"
thanks Alicia, glad you stopped by   |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 22, 2010 6:58:43 GMT -5
fine writing here Lisa... these lines stand out in my opinion: "echoes softly speak phantom shadows crawl elegant moon glows"  Percy, nice to see you here |
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Post by Treasure on Apr 22, 2010 8:19:24 GMT -5
wonderful poem Lisa!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 22, 2010 8:35:57 GMT -5
Hey treasure thanks for stopping by and commenting, much appreciate it!
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Post by Charles on Apr 22, 2010 11:20:24 GMT -5
great write!
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Post by ciara on Apr 22, 2010 12:30:14 GMT -5
great imagery and tone, nice picture good write  hope your day is going well I am out, see ya later |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 22, 2010 12:47:21 GMT -5
thanks blue and ciara!
ciara, my day is going great! how is yours?
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Post by Dana on Apr 22, 2010 21:30:10 GMT -5
I just love this dear Lisa!
have a great evening!
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Post by Bob on Apr 22, 2010 22:01:00 GMT -5
beautifully done, Lisa. I sure love your poetry and I am so glsd you are back posting again |
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Post by Brian on Apr 22, 2010 22:20:14 GMT -5
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Post by Lee on Apr 22, 2010 22:51:32 GMT -5
love everthing about this piece!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 23, 2010 5:39:39 GMT -5
many thanks Dana, Bob, Brain and Lee!!
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Percy, nice to see you here 
this is wonderfully penned Lisa! 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
Hello everyone, sorry I have been away from the site so long but I was swamped with work 
Aug 5, 2021 14:19:11 GMT -5
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Hello everyone, sorry I have been away from the site so long but I was swamped with work 
Aug 5, 2021 14:19:11 GMT -5
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