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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 24, 2010 8:40:51 GMT -5
SATURDAY MORNING
red
roses
in glass vase
light breeze blowing
satin-lace curtains
Burmese cat asleep on
Corinthian leather couch
coffee brewing, bacon frying
mama holds baby, daddy stirs eggs
outside kitchen window sun awakens
©2010 Lisa Arnold
[/color][/size] This is my second etheree...I think it turned out OK..what do you guys think  [/i] |
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Post by Betty on Apr 24, 2010 8:55:42 GMT -5
good job, my lady!
cute cat too, thanks for the post!
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Post by ciara on Apr 24, 2010 8:57:00 GMT -5
oh your poem is so very lovely Lisa  it paints a vivid picture and captures a moment in time in every day life...nice  hope your weekend is blessed   |
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Post by Silent-One on Apr 24, 2010 9:12:11 GMT -5
Hi Lisa I am busy this morning, but wanted to stop by and tell you how much I love this poem. It is so well-crafted I love Burmese cats, they are a loving breed. Is this your cat? I have to run now, so have a great weekend |
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Post by Sierra on Apr 24, 2010 9:26:27 GMT -5
Lisa, your poem is very well-written in my opinion and follows the etheree form to a T...great subject and lovely presentation. I love it have a great weekend everyone |
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Post by Alicia on Apr 24, 2010 9:37:18 GMT -5
Lisa it is simply stated, but it is a very well-crafted etheree  It depicts a clear and precise picture I like it much |
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Post by Charles on Apr 24, 2010 10:06:40 GMT -5
lovely write and a cute little kitty cat, thanks for posting it's a boring day of paying bills and chores for me  have a wonderful weekend my friends |
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Post by bridge on Apr 24, 2010 10:37:08 GMT -5
enjoyed the read Lisa!
wonderfully done, dear Lisa, thanks for the post...
have a lovely and safe weeeknd everybody!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 24, 2010 17:03:27 GMT -5
many thanks everyone!
no, Harry that is not my kitty...got the image off of getty images...
have a great evening all!!!
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Post by Jay on Apr 25, 2010 2:41:03 GMT -5
sweet cat, love the poem!
keep blessing us with your gifts!
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Post by Rose on Apr 25, 2010 2:48:26 GMT -5
another good one Lisa!
I like this form, thanks for sharing!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 25, 2010 3:09:04 GMT -5
sweet cat, love the poem! keep blessing us with your gifts! many thanks Jay |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 25, 2010 3:10:55 GMT -5
another good one Lisa! I like this form, thanks for sharing!  Rose, I like this form too. I appreciate the read and your commenting, much love to you |
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Post by Cherrie on Apr 25, 2010 4:07:44 GMT -5
Lisa you are well-suited to this form, I love it!!
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Post by Bob on Apr 25, 2010 4:47:55 GMT -5
a most delightful write and a true gem, Lisa  |
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Rose, I like this form too. I appreciate the read and your commenting, much love to you 
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
