FOR ME?

[trina]

oh my Lisa, this is stellar wriitng!

excellent!

[Reggie]

Hello Queen of the Pen, love ya

I have always loved this poem because of its depth and meaning. I read it often when I am feeling down or feeling like I cant achieve my goals and it lifts me up...excellent my friend

Have a great weekend my Echoes family
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[Brian]

Lisa, you penned a very strong and uplifting write...congrats on the publication

[Betty]

a very beautiful and impassioned write told from the heart and soul of a lovely person, excellent dear one [/color]

[Sierra]

what a write girlfriend! Gets me pumped and excited for life

love these parts:

"I am barely breathing among them,
living a fruitless mundane life
so very unalike the one’s they lead.
How many times have I said,
“Good Morning and have a nice evening”
without really meaning it?

I could disappear and no one
would take ever notice.
I am no longer a person.
I am a mere shadow on the wall,
a brief silhouette in the hollow of night,
an unheard whisper in the wind.

I am the subject
of any Sylvia Plath poem.
I am the reason why people write
stories of despair."[/color]


forgot to tell everyone to have a great day and weekend..love you guys

[percy]

soild write, love every word


have a wonderful weekend Echoes Family

[Silent-One]

great narrative in this piece..it pulls the reader in and keeps them there

you have penned a glorious write that makes me feel good every time I write it...it reads like a sermon, great job as always Queen of the Pen

have a beautiful day and weekend echoes [/color]

[Sharon]

wonderful write Lisa, always been a fav of mine!

have a great weekend echoes!

[Lisa Arnold]

thanks so much everyone ;D


I deeply appreciate the all of the kind comments and the reads


have a great weeknd my Echoes Family..love you all much

[Dana]

excellent write

l love these passages:

"I could disappear and no one
would ever take notice.
I am no longer a person.
I am a mere shadow on the wall,
a brief silhouette in the hollow of night,
an unheard whisper in the wind.

I am the subject
of any Sylvia Plath poem.
I am the reason why people write
stories of despair.

I am the color of pale;
the epitome of loneliness
and the final definition
of a life tragically lost."

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Have a wonderful weekend Echoes Family [/color]

[bridge]

wonderful as always Lisa!

[Sara]

love it Lisa

thanks for posting and sharing

have a wonderful weekend Echoes Family

[Joan]

I like the personalization and narration of this well-crafted poem...great job Lisa ;D


have a blessed weekend my Echoes peeps

[Lola]

excellent dear lady!

have a great weekend everyone!

[Alicia]

Lisa, my sister of the pen, I love this poem

I am going to get me a glass of wine, draw me a nice warm bubble bath, soak in the tub and think about this wonderful write...love ya

wll you do this for me?

congratulate yourself on a job well done


have a great weekend Echoes