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Post by Alicia on Jun 3, 2010 16:17:39 GMT -5
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Post by Silent-One on Jun 3, 2010 20:53:56 GMT -5
Lisa this story is a beautiful gift to the reader...it shows the goodness of your heart!
very well written and crafted!
I wish you the BEST of luck with publication!
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Post by rico on Jun 3, 2010 21:53:03 GMT -5
well-done Lisa  Whew, I am so happy the little boy lived  ...I was hanging on to hope until the last word  I hope you will post more stories, I truly enjoyed  it...thanks for the fine post   |
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Post by Toni on Jun 4, 2010 5:29:50 GMT -5
a fine story told from the soul, great job!
lovely ending!
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Post by Lola on Jun 4, 2010 5:49:13 GMT -5
I have read this before Lisa, and I love it every time I read it  great style and sense of story  I enjoyed the read! |
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Post by Tamika on Jun 4, 2010 5:54:32 GMT -5
Lisa you have penned a very compassionate, compelling and spiritually written and driven story...excellent job my friend ;D
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Post by Bob on Jun 4, 2010 6:28:33 GMT -5
I always enjoy this one Lisa!
lovely writing...keep up the good work dear one!
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Post by Sara on Jun 4, 2010 6:47:13 GMT -5
beautiful writing as always Lisa!
enjoyed the read!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 4, 2010 6:59:35 GMT -5
thank you everyone for all of the reads and warm comments!
I hope to post another story soon!
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Post by Brian on Jun 4, 2010 15:11:24 GMT -5
beautifully written!
thanks for sharing Lisa!
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Post by Cherrie on Jun 4, 2010 15:18:18 GMT -5
lovely story, told with a great sense of depth and passion, great ending!
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Post by ciara on Jun 4, 2010 17:24:40 GMT -5
beautiful writing dear Lisa!
I enjoyed this well-crafted story very much!
hope you will post more stories for us to enjoy!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 4, 2010 17:48:15 GMT -5
beautifully written! thanks for sharing Lisa!  Brian, good to hear from ya |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 4, 2010 17:49:48 GMT -5
lovely story, told with a great sense of depth and passion, great ending! many thanks Cherrie |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 4, 2010 17:51:44 GMT -5
beautiful writing dear Lisa! I enjoyed this well-crafted story very much! hope you will post more stories for us to enjoy! Ciara I will post another one soon...I think it will be a flash story |
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What a storyteller you are, I hope to read more short stories from you dear sister of the pen ;D 
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echoes, hope you all are doing well 
