Periphery of Light (TOAST OF THE WEEK) 5-27-2011

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Periphery of Light (TOAST OF THE WEEK) 5-27-2011 Jun 12, 2010 8:47:43 GMT -5

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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 12, 2010 8:47:43 GMT -5

Periphery of Light

periphery of light
peers through
impenetrable clouds

serene bluesy winds
blow warmth
from the sea

in the distance
echoing
silence, quietly,
beckons

miles away
muffled train
whistle
screams

rain drops
fall in slip-slop
patterns
on black asphalt

alone, lost
soul, walks
behind veiled
darkness

searching
avenues
for a place
to, finally,
belong

© 2010 Lisa Arnold

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Last Edit: May 27, 2011 6:43:57 GMT -5 by Brianna

dreams echo within...

ciara Echoes Family Member Motivated by Passion Friend of Echoes Posts: 821	Periphery of Light (TOAST OF THE WEEK) 5-27-2011 Jun 12, 2010 9:14:34 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ciara on Jun 12, 2010 9:14:34 GMT -5 strong write Lisa great picture choice loved the read, dear Lisa
	Last Edit: Jun 12, 2010 9:15:39 GMT -5 by ciara waiting for life to begin

Betty Haiku/Short Form Monitor[/size] Posts: 1,477	Periphery of Light (TOAST OF THE WEEK) 5-27-2011 Jun 12, 2010 9:22:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Betty on Jun 12, 2010 9:22:13 GMT -5 very alluring write Lisa it is so sad when some people are locked out of society and are alone, great job

Alicia Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Living Life! Posts: 883	Periphery of Light (TOAST OF THE WEEK) 5-27-2011 Jun 12, 2010 9:59:22 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Alicia on Jun 12, 2010 9:59:22 GMT -5 excellent writing from start to finish, a swift yet satisfying read

Sara Echoes Family Member Billy is my Prince! Friend of Echoes Posts: 830	Periphery of Light (TOAST OF THE WEEK) 5-27-2011 Jun 12, 2010 11:43:38 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sara on Jun 12, 2010 11:43:38 GMT -5 beautiful and excellent Lisa!

Jack Echoes Senior Member Friend of Echoes Posts: 468	Periphery of Light (TOAST OF THE WEEK) 5-27-2011 Jun 12, 2010 17:31:45 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jack on Jun 12, 2010 17:31:45 GMT -5 very well crafted and presented, loved the great read!

Tamika Echoes Family Member Reggie's wife Posts: 858	Periphery of Light (TOAST OF THE WEEK) 5-27-2011 Jun 12, 2010 17:40:12 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Tamika on Jun 12, 2010 17:40:12 GMT -5 wow, I really love this write from you Lisa! keep up the great work, love ya!

Carin Writer's Resources Monitor Friend of Echoes Angel-Girl Posts: 806	Periphery of Light (TOAST OF THE WEEK) 5-27-2011 Jun 12, 2010 17:56:10 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Carin on Jun 12, 2010 17:56:10 GMT -5 lovely write and great imagery as in your these two passages: "periphery of light peers through impenetrable clouds serene bluesy winds blow warmth from the sea" enjoyed the read!
	"Looking within to find my soul"

Silent-One Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Riding The Waves Posts: 659	Periphery of Light (TOAST OF THE WEEK) 5-27-2011 Jun 12, 2010 18:10:38 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Silent-One on Jun 12, 2010 18:10:38 GMT -5 outstanding dear Lisa!
	Remembering where I was, so I will know where I am going...

Brianna Lounge Moderator[/size] Posts: 1,296	Periphery of Light (TOAST OF THE WEEK) 5-27-2011 Jun 12, 2010 18:34:50 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Brianna on Jun 12, 2010 18:34:50 GMT -5 wonderful writing and imagery...very vivually scribed! I really like this part: "rain drops fall in slip-slop patterns on black asphalt"

ken Echoes Senior Member Am I Awake? Friend of Echoes Walter Mosley (writer) Posts: 465	Periphery of Light (TOAST OF THE WEEK) 5-27-2011 Jun 12, 2010 20:28:30 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ken on Jun 12, 2010 20:28:30 GMT -5 excellent as always, great to read you!

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	Periphery of Light (TOAST OF THE WEEK) 5-27-2011 Jun 13, 2010 8:47:17 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 13, 2010 8:47:17 GMT -5 many thanks everyone!
	dreams echo within...

Reggie Writing Prompt Moderator[/size] Friend of Echoes Posts: 1,400	Periphery of Light (TOAST OF THE WEEK) 5-27-2011 Jun 13, 2010 8:55:31 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Reggie on Jun 13, 2010 8:55:31 GMT -5 beautifuly written as always, dear Lisa! I am off to church will catch up with you and the echoes family later!

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	Periphery of Light (TOAST OF THE WEEK) 5-27-2011 Jun 13, 2010 9:32:52 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 13, 2010 9:32:52 GMT -5 thanks Reg! have a nice time at church, see ya soon!
	dreams echo within...

Rose Echoes Family Member Posts: 562	Periphery of Light (TOAST OF THE WEEK) 5-27-2011 Jun 13, 2010 9:35:02 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Rose on Jun 13, 2010 9:35:02 GMT -5 great detail, images and sense of voice, love it!