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Post by Lisa Arnold on Oct 19, 2010 12:03:00 GMT -5
Angel's Breath - an etheree
death
defeated
life granted
another pass
hope given rebirth
angel's breath on shoulders
gift of sweet sanctuary
rests inside humble callous hands
dawn awakens October morning
gracing an intangible existence
©2010 Lisa Arnold
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Post by Joan on Oct 19, 2010 12:17:27 GMT -5
 awesome job Lisa 
I have missed your etheree poems...you write them so well, my dear friend 
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Oct 19, 2010 12:20:46 GMT -5
thanks so much Joan!
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Post by Reggie on Oct 19, 2010 12:37:01 GMT -5
FANTASTIC Lisa
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Post by Betty on Oct 19, 2010 12:58:14 GMT -5
hey now, this is wonderfully written
Lisa, it was so nice to read your words this afternoon  
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Post by Charles on Oct 19, 2010 13:01:31 GMT -5
wondeful poem Lisa, I love the entire piece, but these lines grab my attention:
"gift of sweet sanctuary
rests inside humble callous hands
dawn awakens October morning
gracing an intangible existence" [/center]
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Post by trina on Oct 19, 2010 15:18:21 GMT -5
outstanding Lisa and I agree with you Charles about those lines, fantastic write!
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Post by Joy on Oct 19, 2010 15:58:15 GMT -5
perfection Lisa, love it!!
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Post by Tamika on Oct 19, 2010 16:10:15 GMT -5
wow, what a fantastic etheree, excellent job
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Post by Sara on Oct 19, 2010 18:11:32 GMT -5
a fine example of a etheree, a fine job Lisa!
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Post by ken on Oct 20, 2010 3:55:08 GMT -5
wonderful poem, enjoyed!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Oct 20, 2010 7:11:39 GMT -5
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Oct 20, 2010 7:13:38 GMT -5
thank you so much dear Betty, love ya much my friend
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Oct 20, 2010 7:15:35 GMT -5
wondeful poem Lisa, I love the entire piece, but these lines grab my attention:
"gift of sweet sanctuary
rests inside humble callous hands
dawn awakens October morning
gracing an intangible existence" [/center][/quote] thank you so much for commenting and for the lovely praise, you made my day sparkle, love ya |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Oct 20, 2010 7:18:34 GMT -5
outstanding Lisa and I agree with you Charles about those lines, fantastic write! |
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awesome job Lisa 
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
