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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 13, 2010 18:56:05 GMT -5
YELLOW ROSES
Sultry 85 degree morning, Sylvia was grateful for the overcast sky as she tended her garden. Her son and daughter were at school, and her husband was gone. Two years ago on this date, he left her for a younger woman. Today she plants yellow roses, to celebrate.
©2010 Lisa Arnold
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Post by Sierra on Nov 13, 2010 19:06:07 GMT -5
Hi Lisa,
I love the ending 
good to see"her" moving on 
great little gem 
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 13, 2010 19:08:23 GMT -5
thanks Sierra!
I thought it would be a nice twist and the end!
have a great evening I am off to write!
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Post by Sierra on Nov 13, 2010 19:10:33 GMT -5
OK, happy writing
I am off to see Denzel's new movie 
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Post by Alicia on Nov 13, 2010 21:50:01 GMT -5
 I do love this one Lisa, you are a funny lady
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Post by Reggie on Nov 13, 2010 22:10:02 GMT -5
good job Lisa i thnk in the last line you left out the word "her"  |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 13, 2010 23:02:17 GMT -5
thanks Sierra
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 13, 2010 23:46:33 GMT -5
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 13, 2010 23:48:25 GMT -5
good job Lisa i thnk in the last line you left out the word "her" yeah I changed it up a bit, thanks |
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Post by Betty on Nov 14, 2010 7:54:49 GMT -5
:-/nice story Lisa...I like these really really short stories that seem to be popular these day... 
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 14, 2010 8:30:08 GMT -5
many thanks dear Betty!
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Post by Tamika on Nov 14, 2010 9:18:53 GMT -5
oh this is so great, love it Lisa
one for the ladies
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Post by Eddie on Nov 14, 2010 9:36:03 GMT -5
good one Lisa!
thanks for sharingQ
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 14, 2010 10:15:21 GMT -5
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 14, 2010 10:17:30 GMT -5
good one Lisa! thanks for sharingQ |
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I do love this one Lisa, you are a funny lady 
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
