FORGOTTEN SINS ( a cinquain)

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	FORGOTTEN SINS ( a cinquain) Mar 5, 2005 16:52:56 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 5, 2005 16:52:56 GMT -5 demons descend upon hollow soul harboring forgotten sins committed long ago ©2005 by Lisa Arnold
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Brian Echoes Family Member LonePoet Friend of Echoes Searching for my mind Posts: 1,140	FORGOTTEN SINS ( a cinquain) Mar 5, 2005 17:23:35 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Brian on Mar 5, 2005 17:23:35 GMT -5 very well posed I like cinquain poetry even though I suck at it just curious do you ever write classic cinquain ( 1-2-3-4-1)?
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Cherrie Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Loving This Beautiful Life Posts: 1,002	FORGOTTEN SINS ( a cinquain) Mar 5, 2005 17:55:46 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Cherrie on Mar 5, 2005 17:55:46 GMT -5 great write, Lisa ;D Brian, I suck at writng these too I like them though pssst lets leave the writing of them to Lisa
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icee Echoes Family Member Veiled Emotions Friend of Echoes striving and reaching Posts: 661	FORGOTTEN SINS ( a cinquain) Mar 5, 2005 19:09:57 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by icee on Mar 5, 2005 19:09:57 GMT -5 good job I like this form of poetry too ;D
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Sharon Assistant Administrator[/size] Believe and Achieve Posts: 2,430	FORGOTTEN SINS ( a cinquain) Mar 5, 2005 19:43:32 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sharon on Mar 5, 2005 19:43:32 GMT -5 well done
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quietlyforgotten Guest	FORGOTTEN SINS ( a cinquain) Mar 5, 2005 21:39:05 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by quietlyforgotten on Mar 5, 2005 21:39:05 GMT -5 great job. I haven't tried it before. Seems like a lot of thinking on my part.

dolores Echoes Full Member The way our differences combine to create meaning and beauty... Posts: 159	FORGOTTEN SINS ( a cinquain) Mar 6, 2005 0:39:26 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by dolores on Mar 6, 2005 0:39:26 GMT -5 great write!!! you are so talented, lisa!!!
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FORGOTTEN SINS ( a cinquain) Mar 6, 2005 9:06:47 GMT -5

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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 6, 2005 9:06:47 GMT -5

thanks so much everyone

Brian, I have not tried the classic form yet, but I am going ot give it a try

QuietlySpoken, cinquain can be a quite a task to write But I am grwoing to like them

thanks dolores you are talented as well ;D

dreams echo within...

sweetpest Guest	FORGOTTEN SINS ( a cinquain) Mar 6, 2005 10:08:37 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by sweetpest on Mar 6, 2005 10:08:37 GMT -5 Lisa nicely written...and a haunting verse. Excellent read! Great Job!! *Joan

whisperpoems Guest	FORGOTTEN SINS ( a cinquain) Mar 12, 2005 13:16:25 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by whisperpoems on Mar 12, 2005 13:16:25 GMT -5 Very well posed Lisa!! I like this style very much...I wonder how you do that Kaminten

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FORGOTTEN SINS ( a cinquain) Mar 12, 2005 13:53:26 GMT -5

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Post by aquarianstar on Mar 12, 2005 13:53:26 GMT -5

FABULOUS write!! ;D

I love reading

this style but havn't actually attempted it yet... doesn't look too easy...

Ah well, to the point, which is that you write them exceptionally well, and I look forward to reading

the classic form if you decide to do it.

Good luck and well done again!

'Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate.
Our deepest fear is that we are powerful, beyond measure.
It is our light, not our darkness that frightens us.'

stan Guest	FORGOTTEN SINS ( a cinquain) Mar 13, 2005 3:00:15 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by stan on Mar 13, 2005 3:00:15 GMT -5 Amazing Lisa!!! I wish I could write like that. This is what poetry should be like