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Billy Echoes Senior Member Sara is my Princess! Friend of Echoes Posts: 441	TALISMAN Apr 1, 2006 10:25:32 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Billy on Apr 1, 2006 10:25:32 GMT -5 great job Lisa, I can relate to the struggle of the character, you really know how to pull the reader in and keep them there until the end...nice
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Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	TALISMAN Apr 1, 2006 11:22:21 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 1, 2006 11:22:21 GMT -5 thanks Helen and Billy
	dreams echo within...

Dana Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes beginning again Posts: 983	TALISMAN Apr 3, 2006 4:42:22 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Dana on Apr 3, 2006 4:42:22 GMT -5 wonderful job on this, Lisa! good luck:)

Silent-One Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Riding The Waves Posts: 659	TALISMAN Apr 5, 2006 19:44:10 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Silent-One on Apr 5, 2006 19:44:10 GMT -5 you're welcome Lisa:) it was a pleasure to read
	Remembering where I was, so I will know where I am going...

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	TALISMAN Apr 6, 2006 8:51:38 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 6, 2006 8:51:38 GMT -5 many thanks Dana! and thanks again Harry!
	dreams echo within...

maggie Guest	TALISMAN Apr 7, 2006 4:14:30 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by maggie on Apr 7, 2006 4:14:30 GMT -5 I love the strory, it had me on the edge of my seat.

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	TALISMAN Apr 7, 2006 5:51:16 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 7, 2006 5:51:16 GMT -5 thanks Maggie, I was hoping to hook the reader:) glad you enjoyed it:)
	dreams echo within...

ciara Echoes Family Member Motivated by Passion Friend of Echoes Posts: 821	TALISMAN Apr 9, 2006 6:01:41 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ciara on Apr 9, 2006 6:01:41 GMT -5 good job on this one, love the ending
	waiting for life to begin

Brian Echoes Family Member LonePoet Friend of Echoes Searching for my mind Posts: 1,140	TALISMAN Apr 11, 2006 8:44:19 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Brian on Apr 11, 2006 8:44:19 GMT -5 good work, Lisa!
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Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	TALISMAN Apr 12, 2006 15:51:58 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 12, 2006 15:51:58 GMT -5 thanks ciara and brian!
	dreams echo within...

Alicia Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Living Life! Posts: 883	TALISMAN Apr 13, 2006 19:05:24 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Alicia on Apr 13, 2006 19:05:24 GMT -5 a well-crafted poem, I much enjoyed this

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	TALISMAN Apr 14, 2006 15:49:31 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 14, 2006 15:49:31 GMT -5 thanks Alicia:)
	dreams echo within...

Shell
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TALISMAN Apr 14, 2006 17:11:53 GMT -5

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Post by Shell on Apr 14, 2006 17:11:53 GMT -5

i enjoyed this thoroughly, Lisa! The imagery is ominous and increasingly so as the journey towards sunrise moves, almost painfully slowly, towards its completion ... everything seems tainted, even snake a powerful mystical symbol is ready to be outta there. Moody and evocatively intense!

Last Edit: Apr 17, 2006 17:42:20 GMT -5 by Shell

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	TALISMAN Apr 15, 2006 5:25:29 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 15, 2006 5:25:29 GMT -5 thanks Shell, I appreciate your thoughts and comments on my poem
	dreams echo within...

Sharon Assistant Administrator[/size] Believe and Achieve Posts: 2,430	TALISMAN Apr 16, 2006 9:27:48 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sharon on Apr 16, 2006 9:27:48 GMT -5 Hey Lisa, have you heard anything yet on the publication?
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