JUSTICE FOR TRAYVON -slight revision

[Lisa Arnold]

Mar 28, 2012 7:18:55 GMT -5 Brian said:

outstanding and poweful poem Lisa!

it tells it like it is and does not hold back, excellent job!

many thanks Brian

[Lisa Arnold]

Mar 28, 2012 11:43:15 GMT -5 Lily said:

WOW, Lisa, this is solid writing!

I agree with everything everyone has said so far about your wonderful poem!

thanks for sharing!

thanks so muich dear Lily

[Lisa Arnold]

Mar 28, 2012 17:15:48 GMT -5 Charles said:

bold and precise and on point, excellent job...Lisa!

many thanks Charles, I really appreciate you stopping by and commenting

[Lisa Arnold]

Mar 29, 2012 5:41:32 GMT -5 Tina said:

this one is right on point, brilliant write Lisa!

thanks so much dear Tina

[Lisa Arnold]

Mar 29, 2012 10:58:16 GMT -5 Jack said:

wonderful poem Lisa!

many thanks Jack

[Lisa Arnold]

Mar 29, 2012 18:13:09 GMT -5 Lee said:

this one is spot on Lisa!

you do not miss a point in this wonderful and powerful poem...thanks for posting!

thanks Lee, so nice of you to stop by

[Lisa Arnold]

Mar 30, 2012 0:37:46 GMT -5 Reggie said:

back again for another read of your poem, Lisa...brilliant write!

seems the killer is caught in yet another lie, did you catch that video of the killer moments after he killed Trayvon...I ask where are his bruises?

glad you read it again Reg yes I saw that video and it makes it very clear to me who is not telling the truth!

[Lisa Arnold]

Mar 30, 2012 1:27:13 GMT -5 rico said:

Lisa, this poem is very timely and responsible, it speaks to the heart and soul of man, excellent job

this part stands out for me:

"a life of promise
and a kid's dreams
ended in seconds
because he was
a young man
whose only crime
was walking
down the street
while black"

thanks so much Rico, that is my favorite part too

[Cyndi]

Lisa, thank you for having the courage and strength to write this poem it says it all and then some...excellent job as always!

[ciara]

fantastic writing, well-done, Lisa!

[Sierra]

solid write, Lisa!

I think he is going to get away with murder, but your poem spells it all out for us all...thank you!

[Lisa Arnold]

Mar 30, 2012 2:21:59 GMT -5 Cyndi said:

Lisa, thank you for having the courage and strength to write this poem it says it all and then some...excellent job as always!

many thanks Cyndi

[Lisa Arnold]

Mar 30, 2012 3:38:04 GMT -5 ciara said:

fantastic writing, well-done, Lisa!

thanks Ciara

[Lisa Arnold]

Mar 30, 2012 8:38:58 GMT -5 Sierra said:

solid write, Lisa!

I think he is going to get away with murder, but your poem spells it all out for us all...thank you!

many thanks sierra yes they are covering it up, now they are saying they cleaned the killer up before those pictures were taken and that is why there were no bruises or cuts on him...yeah sure they did...

[Dana]

Mar 26, 2012 18:14:05 GMT -5 Lisa Arnold said:

Mar 26, 2012 18:05:05 GMT -5 Dana said:

WOW, Lisa this is one of your finest and most powerful writes, this is the month anniversary of Trayvon's death and your poem captures the entire essence of this horrible crime, thank you for sharing your excellent poem with us at Echoes!

thank you Dana, your kind words have embracd my soul...

you are more than welcome Lisa, I cherish this write :-/I am telling everyoene I know to stop by and give it a read