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Post by purplespirit on Feb 11, 2012 13:06:51 GMT -5
Winter's Comfort
Out of the chimney float wood smoke curls
The air is full of dancing snowflake swirls,
I love the sound of burning branches
And the fragrance from logs of oak trees.
The fire lit room with dim light gives peace
It seems so easy here to release,
This cosy feeling stirs deep content
A quiet heart, a simple home are heaven sent.
A day dream appears of blackbirds and boughs
I can almost hear the sound of spring laughs.
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Post by michaelgallatin on Feb 11, 2012 13:46:08 GMT -5
Gentle and pretty. Nice picture in this poem!
Namaste,
Mike
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Post by purplespirit on Feb 13, 2012 13:02:33 GMT -5
Always my thanks dear friend, for taking time to read and comment. Blessings! Ulla xx
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Post by The Great Fulcanelli on Feb 17, 2012 12:44:52 GMT -5
H'm, sounds like something I could envy. Hell, we ALL do envy people with snow down here. It can never be too cold for us, save during the monsoon. And even then, they don't last.
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Post by purplespirit on Feb 17, 2012 17:07:52 GMT -5
At present there is a lot too much of this white splendor here, so I would gladly share... Thank you for your nice comment CR. Ulla xx
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Post by rrw on Feb 17, 2012 23:42:12 GMT -5
I can almost hear the sound of spring laughs. I just love this closing line. I also love the "cozy" feel of the whole poem. This is delightful... and we don't get enough delightful written in this special way. |
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Post by purplespirit on Feb 18, 2012 3:55:56 GMT -5
RRW, your great comment really makes me happy, thank you Sir for your kindness! Ulla xx
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Post by diasdoano on Feb 25, 2012 18:14:26 GMT -5
Ulla dear, it is beautiful the way you describe Winter`s Comfort ! The way your heating system works is so well descreptive ... a lesson for me as I know nothing about it. And the Spring laughs say the next seoson will be with you soon ! Thanks for one more great job !
Domício.
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Post by purplespirit on Feb 26, 2012 13:16:11 GMT -5
You're so kind always Domìcio, thank you for  this and even liking it (smile). The first shy flowers stretch out their head from ice and snow and they definitely invite Spring to hurry by. Your comment has made my Sunday, thanks so much. Ulla xx |
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this and even liking it (smile). The first shy flowers stretch out their head from ice and snow and they definitely invite Spring to hurry by. Your comment has made my Sunday, thanks so much. Ulla xx
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echoes, hope you all are doing well 
