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Feb 26, 2012 23:23:54 GMT -5
Post by thomasruffin on Feb 26, 2012 23:23:54 GMT -5
mirror ... speak only the truth be not deceptive to me be not less than honest ... in your reflection
reveal to me who I am ... and why
do not be subtle do not be kind
simply illuminate me and, if it should be, expose me
do not be dim do not be hazy do not be cloudy be as clear as diamonds
if you, my mirror, are no less approving then I shall be at ease
if you, my mirror, reflect the horror of who I am then it shall be confirmed
I am what I appear to be
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Feb 27, 2012 5:19:00 GMT -5
Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 27, 2012 5:19:00 GMT -5
I love this one, Thomas!
excellent piece, thanks for the post!
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Feb 27, 2012 11:41:45 GMT -5
Post by rrw on Feb 27, 2012 11:41:45 GMT -5
Thom. This is an excellent poem. the idea is wonderful... and I've never heard it before. Well put together... something to read over and over.
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Feb 28, 2012 14:04:30 GMT -5
Post by Reggie on Feb 28, 2012 14:04:30 GMT -5
well said Thomas, good to read you here again!
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Feb 29, 2012 19:03:10 GMT -5
Post by diasdoano on Feb 29, 2012 19:03:10 GMT -5
Very good job, Thomas ! I Enjoyed ! Everything says you are a true man in all that you do ! I read and read it and being myself the first time I do you, I say Thanks for share it with us ! DomÃcio
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Mar 1, 2012 13:30:40 GMT -5
Post by purplespirit on Mar 1, 2012 13:30:40 GMT -5
Delightful spiritual poem, catching attention immediately and with every stanza stirring the urge to read further. Much enjoyed, thank you. Ulla xx
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Mar 3, 2012 12:35:19 GMT -5
Post by poetkate on Mar 3, 2012 12:35:19 GMT -5
do not be subtle do not be kind
simply illuminate me
One truly searching after truth. Rare in this day and age. Like the wise message here.
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