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Post by jbstillwater on Feb 13, 2012 19:17:45 GMT -5
Thoughtful days – thoughtless nights; sweet winter memories. For there is heat within the heart that melts snow from a winter flower. Images of torn-between. Choosing to remember. Longing to forget Caresses tender, crooked smile. Naughty nights in cramped spaces. A body mapped with paths, yet no signs to follow-virgin woods. North or south? How he loved me! Purple passion ‘pon my limbs and a kiss goodbye to remember on thoughtless nights, bringing fire to light-lit embers, and memories of spring gone-by.
He loves me - he loves me not He loves me - he loves me not!
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Post by pegesus on Feb 14, 2012 16:16:56 GMT -5
memories live within our heart and souls of past loves....teaching us...helping us...find the path that leads us to our hearts destiny....this evokes so much memories for everyone who reads this of their journies to understand and find their true love....well written and excellent imagery...i enjoyed this immensly peg
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 14, 2012 22:04:41 GMT -5
very well-writen and expresse, I enjoyed the read!
thanks for the post!
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Post by rrw on Feb 15, 2012 1:27:47 GMT -5
A nicely worded memory poem... lots of love... and I really enjoy the idea that pulling the petals from a flower.... has a certain amount of pain... which mirrors the pain of love. Nice work.
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Post by purplespirit on Feb 15, 2012 12:44:22 GMT -5
This is admirable Jan and perfectly narrated. There is much feeling and sentiments with it and surely stirs some memories within the reader. Once long ago we did "ask" the daisies without knowing about real love yet. Thank you my friend, it was pure joy to read this. Ulla xx
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Post by jbstillwater on Feb 16, 2012 16:27:32 GMT -5
Thanks guys, glad you liked it. Yes, Robert, pulling petals - pain and random guessing about love and the consequences. Huggs to all - Jan
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