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Post by rrw on Feb 15, 2012 1:33:47 GMT -5
Nice work... love the prophetic attitude of the piece. You're phrasing is really solid.
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Post by rrw on Feb 15, 2012 1:37:12 GMT -5
I went back and read the full poem. Not sure why you idn't post the whole piece... works even better.
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Post by purplespirit on Feb 15, 2012 12:46:47 GMT -5
Good write CR, the 'tomorrow' won't come for so many while we all keep hoping for this good change to take place. Enjoyed, thank you. Ulla xx
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Post by jbstillwater on Feb 16, 2012 16:29:13 GMT -5
Would love to read the entire peice, but this works wonderfully, too! Much enjoyed Jan
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Post by diasdoano on Feb 17, 2012 18:31:09 GMT -5
... is a very well said job ! So full of hopes and positivism ! It worthy to be read ! Thank you for sharing it with us all ! DomÃcio.
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