Optical Nerve

frankievon
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Optical Nerve Nov 19, 2011 2:30:55 GMT -5

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Post by frankievon on Nov 19, 2011 2:30:55 GMT -5

My optical nerve twitches from time to time,
indicating a spark in my mind,
these thoughts are unlikely obscure and quite frightening,
oh where is it I shall draw the line...

Twisted and wicked,
what once was constricted,
has shattered and inflicted the darkness that now dwells inside.

No longer restricted grow weary and sickened,
I end with a solemn goodbye......

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	Optical Nerve Nov 19, 2011 23:52:08 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 19, 2011 23:52:08 GMT -5 well-done, strong imagery, enjoyed the read!
	dreams echo within...

johan Echoes Family Member Just me:The Watering Place of Good Peace can only be the long sleep of eternity. Posts: 4,464	Optical Nerve Nov 22, 2011 10:34:24 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by johan on Nov 22, 2011 10:34:24 GMT -5 Another fine piece. Johan
	The Sad Sailor. Poetry by Johan (Andrew Shiston) can be found as a guest poet on the excellent site of writer and published poet JB Stillwater. www.jbstillwater.com Johan voted poet of the year 2007. My book 'A Bay of Skeletons' is now on sale at Author House My new book 'Diary of a Merchant Seaman' is now being published, out in the spring published by Casa De Snapdragon. JBStillwater (Jan

The Great Fulcanelli Echoes Full Member "Magic is the means by which we transform our own consciousness." Posts: 241	Optical Nerve Jan 9, 2012 0:39:22 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by The Great Fulcanelli on Jan 9, 2012 0:39:22 GMT -5 Good one with suspense in it. I wonder how it all ended?
	"The coming to presence of technology threatens revealing, threatens it with the possibility that all revealing will be consumed in ordering and that everything will present itself only in the unconcealedness of standing-reserve." — Martin Heidegger, Die Frage Nach Der Technik

rrw Echoes Family Member You gotta move Posts: 5,998	Optical Nerve Jan 9, 2012 3:18:42 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rrw on Jan 9, 2012 3:18:42 GMT -5 Nice use of quick shocks of rhythm... gives the piece a reall sense of life.