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Post by rrw on Dec 16, 2011 7:15:11 GMT -5
Christmas Time Here and There
We spent a good part of our American youth dreaming Christmas. Wading as it where through a chilly December sea of jolliness in thick boots of good will towards men (and women too). We trampled through the Christmas card-like banks of winter snow deep and clean. The mistletoe above heads, our hearts warm giving, green wreathes of fresh pine needles hung on every door. Yes, that was our childhood, up early that morning of Christmas day with sleepy but smiling faces as the presents one by one were opened.
But there was that other life, that other Christmas which bled itself to death in steamy jungles, with backs breaking from the weight of flak jackets and backpacks stuffed with dirty socks, letters from home, and the bare naked hope that we might live another day, would make it home one day and in one piece. That other Christmas that tasted like sweat and C-rations, cigarettes and warm beer, smelled like napalm and gun power and fear. That one Christmas where the cheer was thin but well appreciated by all the boys who’s only Christmas wish was to see their families and friends again.
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Dec 16, 2011 16:23:24 GMT -5
I really like your style Robert, great sense of detail and description, I much enjoyed the read thanks for posting and Happy Holidays!
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Post by rrw on Dec 16, 2011 23:54:56 GMT -5
I really like your style Robert, great sense of detail and description, I much enjoyed the read thanks for posting and Happy Holidays! Thanks, Lisa, and I did somw rewrites on it just now. Getting into the habit of going in and making this just a bit better (I hope).
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Post by purplespirit on Dec 18, 2011 13:01:51 GMT -5
Some people - like me - have no idea how cruel a Christmas apart from home can be. Your poem is wonderful and would make us more humble and grateful. Thank you! Happy Holiday! Ulla xx
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Post by rrw on Dec 19, 2011 15:32:21 GMT -5
Thanks, PS! I just always like the differences between things... found this interesting to work on.
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Post by johan on Dec 28, 2011 15:51:38 GMT -5
As always Rob wonderful touching poetry at Christmas, great my friend. Johan
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Post by michaelgallatin on Dec 30, 2011 12:29:19 GMT -5
This made me cry my friend! My son was in the Marines though I don't believe he was away at Christmas. Yet he missed much at home and we missed him. And I know soldiers experience a fear that I can't even comprehend. But, you know something, there's fear at home in their loved ones' hearts and minds as well. So, part of that fear at least is shared. My son has been home for a long time now but I still pray constantly for the young men and women who aren't. So very glad the troops are out of Iraq! Only wish, hope and pray they all come home where they belong and get out of harm's way!
This is a very fine, though extremely sad, and meaningful poem!
Happy Holidays! Mike
PS - I'd really like to know if this is a personal picture if I'm not prying!
PPS - "Wading as it (were)" is I believe what you want there.
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Post by rrw on Jan 2, 2012 12:29:32 GMT -5
Thanks, Mike! The funny thing is that I can't remember EVERY Birthday, Christmas, 4th of July that I've experienced in this life... But I DO remember those holidays spent in Nam. Funny, isn't it? Anyway, welcome your son home for me and thank him for his service.
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Post by The Great Fulcanelli on Jan 2, 2012 19:56:54 GMT -5
Festival times are always poignant times of rememberance when times of war came by. I'm just wondering now how my grandparents celebrated New Year during those four years the Japanese made life hell for them. A pity they're all gone now, so no asking them even if I mastered enough Chinese to make myself understood these days
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Post by rrw on Jan 2, 2012 22:40:57 GMT -5
You know I never thought of asking the same thing of my parents... my dad was a WWII vet and my mom was "Rosie the Riveter." But I often think that during rough times moments of celebration though rare were probably welcomed maybe with more joy than during pieace time. Thoughtful comment.
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