I'm Searching For Hearts (POTD) 12-13-2011

jeannesoul
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I'm Searching For Hearts (POTD) 12-13-2011 Dec 12, 2011 9:59:17 GMT -5

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Post by jeannesoul on Dec 12, 2011 9:59:17 GMT -5

I'm searching for hearts...
Pure and deep
Strong and golden
Sincere and kind
With deep down luster
Having feelings and
Thoughts that want
To help those less
Fortunate,
Hearts that are
Mature and believe
In spiritual soul-mates
Hearts that belong
To someone - that do
That special pitter-patter
When the right person
Is around...

Hearts that move people
Hearts that have passion
Hearts that are breakable,
Because of deep love
Hearts that think about
You right inside,
Hearts that are beautiful
And reach right into
Your soul...

I'm searching for hearts...

Last Edit: Dec 13, 2011 5:37:11 GMT -5 by Lisa Arnold

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	I'm Searching For Hearts (POTD) 12-13-2011 Dec 12, 2011 11:50:46 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Dec 12, 2011 11:50:46 GMT -5 Hello and to my forum! great poem I like the style and easy flow it, good job! thanks for posting, and I hope to read more from you
	Last Edit: Dec 12, 2011 11:55:55 GMT -5 by Lisa Arnold dreams echo within...

backstreetdreamer Echoes Family Member Posts: 818	I'm Searching For Hearts (POTD) 12-13-2011 Dec 12, 2011 13:36:03 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by backstreetdreamer on Dec 12, 2011 13:36:03 GMT -5 Beautiful poetry Jeanne, and also my welcome to the site, I hope you will stay around and get to know us...Keith.

rrw Echoes Family Member You gotta move Posts: 5,998	I'm Searching For Hearts (POTD) 12-13-2011 Dec 12, 2011 14:49:14 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rrw on Dec 12, 2011 14:49:14 GMT -5 I like the sweetnes of the piece... AND the "take no prisoners" attitude of it too. You want what you want. Good, strong phrasing.
	Last Edit: Dec 12, 2011 14:49:55 GMT -5 by rrw

michaelgallatin
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I'm Searching For Hearts (POTD) 12-13-2011 Dec 12, 2011 15:10:02 GMT -5

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Post by michaelgallatin on Dec 12, 2011 15:10:02 GMT -5

Welcome milady to Echoes! Your first poem here, a pure, honest and heartfelt piece. There are many hearts here that I think would fit with what you're looking for. If it's friends and kindred spirits you search for, it will be easy to find them here. If my friend, you look for something deeper, I wish you luck. I might gladly give you my heart but it was stolen by another lady 38 years ago when I saw her at a bus-stop!

Happy Holidays,
Mike
PS - 38 years later she still puts up with me. Now there's a Christmas miracle!

Last Edit: Dec 12, 2011 15:10:51 GMT -5 by michaelgallatin

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	I'm Searching For Hearts (POTD) 12-13-2011 Dec 13, 2011 5:36:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Dec 13, 2011 5:36:13 GMT -5 ENJOY your award, great poem...love your style!
	dreams echo within...

Betty Haiku/Short Form Monitor[/size] Posts: 1,477	I'm Searching For Hearts (POTD) 12-13-2011 Dec 13, 2011 9:07:10 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Betty on Dec 13, 2011 9:07:10 GMT -5 a great strong piece, CONGRATS on the POTD! Welcome to Echoes!

Sharon Assistant Administrator[/size] Believe and Achieve Posts: 2,430	I'm Searching For Hearts (POTD) 12-13-2011 Dec 13, 2011 9:46:56 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sharon on Dec 13, 2011 9:46:56 GMT -5 fantastic write, CONGRATS on the award and Welcome to Lisa's site!
	"There's a peace inside us all" - Scott Stapp

johan Echoes Family Member Just me:The Watering Place of Good Peace can only be the long sleep of eternity. Posts: 4,464	I'm Searching For Hearts (POTD) 12-13-2011 Dec 13, 2011 11:01:14 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by johan on Dec 13, 2011 11:01:14 GMT -5 Avery welcome to Echoes, a fine poem, gongrats on your award. Johan
	The Sad Sailor. Poetry by Johan (Andrew Shiston) can be found as a guest poet on the excellent site of writer and published poet JB Stillwater. www.jbstillwater.com Johan voted poet of the year 2007. My book 'A Bay of Skeletons' is now on sale at Author House My new book 'Diary of a Merchant Seaman' is now being published, out in the spring published by Casa De Snapdragon. JBStillwater (Jan

Brian Echoes Family Member LonePoet Friend of Echoes Searching for my mind Posts: 1,140	I'm Searching For Hearts (POTD) 12-13-2011 Dec 13, 2011 11:31:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Brian on Dec 13, 2011 11:31:13 GMT -5 Welcome to the site, and CONGRATS on the award...a fine poem!
	"Trying to succeed"

rrw Echoes Family Member You gotta move Posts: 5,998	I'm Searching For Hearts (POTD) 12-13-2011 Dec 13, 2011 11:35:40 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rrw on Dec 13, 2011 11:35:40 GMT -5 congrates on poem of the day!

rustybroadspear Echoes Full Member Posts: 247	I'm Searching For Hearts (POTD) 12-13-2011 Dec 14, 2011 18:00:53 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rustybroadspear on Dec 14, 2011 18:00:53 GMT -5 queen of hearts ...... simple and sincere ........