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Post by frankievon on Nov 22, 2011 11:01:07 GMT -5
Lucid dreams, Distant screams, Sights unseen, Below the streams, Soulless shadows, Sway from gallows, Moonlit glare, Reflective shallows, Recollection, Vast perception, I walk this path, Parallel deception, Alines the trail, So bitter and frail, Logarithmic scale, Numeric avail, Guides my mind, To unravel my tale..
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 23, 2011 17:41:21 GMT -5
precise and well-written poem
says much in so few words, excellent job!
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Post by Larsen M. Callirhoe on Nov 24, 2011 1:42:05 GMT -5
wow this was an amazing read. ii really enjoyed readung this. it flowed like butter. so thank you.
victor
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Post by jbstillwater on Nov 28, 2011 14:50:22 GMT -5
Good form, good writing Jan
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Post by rustybroadspear on Nov 29, 2011 14:18:37 GMT -5
great poem - one for each reader to interpret - my interpretation is of memories - are they all true ?
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