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Post by rustybroadspear on Nov 29, 2011 14:39:39 GMT -5
It’s Not My Party
I am an outsider looking in. The party’s in full swing, Jeremy the surveyor has taken the top of his head off, People look in and see nothing.
Part of Alice’s brain has died, She’s on her seventh gin. She’s groping Andrew Asking when the party will begin.
Andrew the bank clerk Falls back onto the music machine, The music stops, Alice throws up, Then she turns green.
Jenny the hostess Ignores the mess, Restarts the music And straightens her dress.
She’s holding the party ‘Cos her husband’s dead, And left her with money And a half empty bed.
Across the room, She eyes up Mike, He’s got a Porche And a BMW motorbike.
Martin and Lewis are sharing a chair Lewis loves Martin But Martin doesn’t care, He’s in love with himself And his yellow dyed hair.
Mike spots Jenny Heading his way. Alice swallows her eighth, And starts to sway.
Mike turns around And heads for the door Thought it was out but it was the bedroom. Jenny pushes him through and onto the floor.
The music went soft The lights dipped dim The general atmosphere Started to swim.
Some people got close, Some further apart. Then some of them left in pairs, Having fallen in love.
I took my smile of irony home.
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Post by michaelgallatin on Nov 30, 2011 10:49:05 GMT -5
Have a few but don't overdo! Hey, another cute rhyming slogan for not drinking to excess. Sounds like a wild party. I did a few when I was young but not too many. Never once went to a "beer blast" when I was in college because I couldn't stand beer. I still can't stomach it much though Coors Light is OK. Ever been almost completely sober when everyone else was "blasted"? Gives you a scary perspective on people and sounds a lot like this poem. I'm happy for the ones who found love (or perhaps even just good sex). Namaste, Mike
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Post by johan on Dec 1, 2011 8:07:35 GMT -5
This reminds of Michael's poetry, nice read, enjoyed this.
Johan
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Dec 3, 2011 21:43:25 GMT -5
a very well-crafted poem, thank you for sharing and posting!
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Post by jbstillwater on Dec 5, 2011 17:57:46 GMT -5
Excellent slam, well written and a great one to perform when you get the chance.
Great writing, look forward to more
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