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Post by johan on Dec 1, 2011 8:22:36 GMT -5
 Reflecting mirror of sunlight
A water glazed pane of sea
Lapping at gnarled rotten shearlegs
Drowned dead stumps of a tree
Mountains of culumus nimbus
Reaching far down to the sea
Lifting a red orb of sunlight
Letting the daylight break free. |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Dec 1, 2011 14:43:20 GMT -5
wow Andrew!
beautiful writing as always, thank you for posting!
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Post by backstreetdreamer on Dec 2, 2011 12:49:56 GMT -5
We see through the same eyes Johan, lovely poetry...Keith.
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Post by michaelgallatin on Dec 3, 2011 12:04:11 GMT -5
 Very pretty my friend and a treat to find here today. One question and no offense meant. Did you mean to say "cumulus nimbus"? But whatever, I'll drink to the poem and to you either way Sir! God bless, Mike 
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Post by purplespirit on Dec 3, 2011 18:16:31 GMT -5
So calm and beautiful - simply a diamond poem, thank you! Ursula xx
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Post by rrw on Dec 4, 2011 14:38:42 GMT -5
As always, Johan, you have that wonderful phrasing going on that lets us see the beauty, strong and power of the sea and nature in general. Lovely phrasing.
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Dec 5, 2011 7:48:09 GMT -5
again Andrew, an excellent poem and ENJOY your award!
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Post by johan on Dec 5, 2011 9:00:51 GMT -5
Thank you for the award Lisa and thank all my friends for your lovely comments.
Andrew
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Post by jbstillwater on Dec 5, 2011 17:45:50 GMT -5
Oh, I love thisone, A...... perfecto in every way! May be my fav
Huggs-Jan
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Very pretty my friend and a treat to find here today. One question and no offense meant. Did you mean to say "cumulus nimbus"? But whatever, I'll drink to the poem and to you either way Sir!
and 
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time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
