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Post by frankievon on Nov 20, 2011 21:44:11 GMT -5
Silent echoes galloping in the breeze, followed by the rustling of the falling leaves, streets bare to where they unwind too, darkness my friend is what im inclined too, the distant voices..., whom, procreate choices, have been shunned away to the vast plains, of my cerebral fortress.., where to were to whom to he, shall i be forever free, 314 is the key you'll see.......
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 21, 2011 8:58:32 GMT -5
great tone and style, enjoyed the read, many thanks to you for posting!
love the first two opening lines
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Post by purplespirit on Nov 21, 2011 13:17:12 GMT -5
Great write my friend, a poem with sentiments of seasonal Autumn as well as of the Autumn of life. Deep meaning, perfect flow, thank you. Ulla xx
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Post by rustybroadspear on Nov 21, 2011 16:03:30 GMT -5
sounds powerful, sounds very good, sounds autumnal, sounds as if from a raging mind - sounds as if 314 is the key .............?
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