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Post by Lisa Arnold on Sept 24, 2013 3:10:40 GMT -5
SECRETS
ominous gray sky
within hollow
Southern winds
long guarded secrets
moan and bespeak
©2013 Lisa Arnold
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Post by Bob on Sept 24, 2013 3:17:17 GMT -5
yes Lisa, those dirty little secrets can never stay hidden 
I love this form and the way you write them with perfection  
keep em coming  
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Post by Lily on Sept 24, 2013 3:29:03 GMT -5
I am with you on this one Lisa
excellent job
thanks for posting and sharing
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Post by Sharon on Sept 24, 2013 3:37:11 GMT -5
oh yes, girl
I love the way you write these
thanks for the post 
take care
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Post by Reggie on Sept 24, 2013 3:54:28 GMT -5
how do you keep churning out these jewels, Lisa
I treasure the gift of you
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Post by Jack on Sept 24, 2013 4:55:02 GMT -5
Lisa, you always take the reader right there and keep them captive, great piece!
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Post by Brianna on Sept 24, 2013 5:21:02 GMT -5
Lisa, you always manage to say so much with so few words
great and powerful gem
thanks for posting
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Post by Carin on Sept 24, 2013 5:30:16 GMT -5
I love it, Lisa
I can only stay a few minutes, I am off to work 
take care and thanks for the great read this morning
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Post by Betty on Sept 24, 2013 6:46:55 GMT -5
wonderfully done Lisa
thanks for the great read and post
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Post by Carin on Sept 24, 2013 12:37:43 GMT -5
I love it, Lisa!
keep them coming!
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Post by Tina on Sept 24, 2013 18:21:15 GMT -5
a wonderful gem, Lisa!
it was a pleasure to read ya!
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Post by Kristi on Sept 25, 2013 1:24:29 GMT -5
vivid imagery, Lisa
nice job as always, thanks for the post!
I sent you a PM:)
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Post by Dana on Sept 25, 2013 10:24:39 GMT -5
I like your poem too, good job!
Lisa, I sent you a PM too, have a great day!
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Post by bridge on Sept 25, 2013 15:55:18 GMT -5
well-done, lady!
keep up the great work and have a wonderful evening!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Sept 25, 2013 17:47:52 GMT -5
thanks so much everyone
I deeply appreciate all of your kind thoughts about my poem
have a great evening everyone
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and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
