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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 3, 2014 1:44:34 GMT -5
BALLERINA DREAMS - A Goyohka
dancing shoes hidden
inside crumpled box
ballerina dreams buried
beneath the dust like
the rest of her desires
©2014 Lisa Arnold
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Post by Reggie on Apr 3, 2014 21:42:32 GMT -5
great write Lisa!
I am liking your new poems...keep them coming!
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Post by mark on Apr 3, 2014 22:27:42 GMT -5
I know the feeling..we all give up something we dreamed of doing in our lives...well-said and presented!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 4, 2014 3:03:54 GMT -5
many thanks Reg and Mark!
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Post by ciara on Apr 4, 2014 4:42:15 GMT -5
a solid write Lisa!
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Post by Kristi on Apr 4, 2014 9:47:43 GMT -5
very eloquently expressed, good job Lisa!
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Post by trina on Apr 4, 2014 17:56:01 GMT -5
wonderful job Lisa!
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Post by Bob on Apr 5, 2014 3:56:50 GMT -5
solid write Lisa!
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Post by Carin on Apr 6, 2014 4:37:41 GMT -5
another gem from you dear lady!
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Post by Eddie on Apr 7, 2014 13:09:25 GMT -5
solid write Lisa!
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Post by Sharon on Apr 7, 2014 18:30:32 GMT -5
I like this one much Lisa!
thanks for sharing!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 8, 2014 2:31:34 GMT -5
thanks so much Ciara, Kristi, Trina, Bob,Carin, Eddie and Sharon!
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Post by Alicia on Apr 9, 2014 23:46:14 GMT -5
fantastic Lisa!
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Post by trina on Apr 10, 2014 3:45:03 GMT -5
you are welcome Lisa!
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Post by icee on Apr 10, 2014 17:31:00 GMT -5
well-done!
sadly,our dreams do elude us from time-to-time
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and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
