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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 11, 2014 10:58:18 GMT -5
THE ESCAPE – A Whitney
storm rises
gray horizon
faint moonlight
brutal winds blow
open gate
black cat escapes
into dense grassy woodlands
©2014 Lisa Arnold
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Post by Tamika on Apr 11, 2014 11:06:55 GMT -5
I love it Lisa!
I am so glad the kitty escaped!
thanks for the great read!
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Post by trina on Apr 11, 2014 11:24:09 GMT -5
I like the way your poem builds to the end...great job!
I also like the theme and I am so happy the cat escaped, I love cats:)
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Post by Reggie on Apr 11, 2014 11:36:53 GMT -5
I love the tale you have weaved Lisa, great write!
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Post by mark on Apr 11, 2014 12:06:05 GMT -5
Hi Lisa, I like it too!
thanks for posting...
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 11, 2014 12:17:56 GMT -5
Hi guys!
thanks so much!
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Post by Sharon on Apr 11, 2014 13:04:42 GMT -5
very nicely done Lisa!
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Post by Tina on Apr 12, 2014 2:01:27 GMT -5
nice one Lisa, I love your short poems!
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Post by Tamika on Apr 12, 2014 2:56:19 GMT -5
I like it too!
I love kitty cats:)
thanks for he great read Lisa...
Enjoy your weekend Lisa!
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Post by Cherrie on Apr 13, 2014 5:05:33 GMT -5
Lisa, you have painted a vivid picture, great job!
thanks for letting the kitty escape!
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Post by bridge on Apr 13, 2014 7:59:19 GMT -5
another great one Lisa!
thanks for posting and have a wonderful Sunday!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 13, 2014 9:14:10 GMT -5
many thanks to you Sharon, Tina, Tami, Cherrie and Dan!
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Post by percy on Apr 14, 2014 11:57:12 GMT -5
well-done Lisa, glad the cat escaped!
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Post by Brian on Apr 15, 2014 0:38:46 GMT -5
I like it as well, Lisa, good stuff!
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Post by Bob on Apr 15, 2014 10:47:22 GMT -5
good read Lisa, thanks for letting the cat survive!
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and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
