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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 8, 2018 9:10:36 GMT -5
The Fray
soul barren mind numb cold hands fumble to find truth of lies hidden beneath the fray
©2018 Lisa Arnold
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Post by Joan on Jul 8, 2018 9:39:04 GMT -5
strongly written with a wealth of passion, love it!
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Post by bridge on Jul 8, 2018 9:48:21 GMT -5
hey Lisa, this is solid writing!
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Post by Brianna on Jul 8, 2018 9:59:34 GMT -5
Lisa, like always you paint a portrait with so few words, excellent job and thanks for posting!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 8, 2018 10:10:26 GMT -5
thanks so much everyone!
I jotted this one down this morning and wanted to share it with you fine people
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Post by trina on Jul 8, 2018 10:40:53 GMT -5
excellent job!
wow, I can't believe you just jotted this one down in a few minutes
thanks for sharing
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Post by Reggie on Jul 8, 2018 10:55:33 GMT -5
thanks for sharing your poetic genius with us at Echoes, love ya Queen
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Post by Lola on Jul 8, 2018 11:12:01 GMT -5
great writing, love every word!!!
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Post by Sierra on Jul 8, 2018 12:12:24 GMT -5
you do write micro poems well, good job!
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Post by Tamika on Jul 8, 2018 12:55:25 GMT -5
a gem, Lisa!
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Post by Jack on Jul 8, 2018 13:22:08 GMT -5
nice poem!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 8, 2018 13:51:47 GMT -5
many thanks!
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Post by Carin on Jul 9, 2018 8:27:50 GMT -5
excellent write, Lisa!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 9, 2018 10:11:15 GMT -5
thanks Carin
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Post by Bob on Jul 9, 2018 11:19:36 GMT -5
a fine poem
thanks for the post
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