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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 14, 2018 6:26:24 GMT -5
Wounded kiss my wounded mind make it whole again it's got a bad bruise that’s festering, so, baby please treat it kindly trust in the process and believe in the impossible pretend-to-be dream they always telling me about soul is running on empty searching for the unreal trying to shut out all the clatter called doubt and embrace faith in self but it all will only turn around if my belief is still on the real I’m through debating the blatant and the obvious got to make my life’s work worth the sacrifice of this three decade’s long mirage around my wrists rests these imaginary rusty chains, got to shake em loose and so do you yeah, I see you wearing them too...the scars and scratches these wicked chains have left yes, you are wounded just like me ©2018 Lisa Arnold ***just wanted to let you peeps know "Wounded" is part of my new collection I am working on  |
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Post by Betty on Jul 14, 2018 6:48:18 GMT -5
WOW, Lisa!
this is strong and powerful writing 
can't wait for your new collection
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Post by Lee on Jul 14, 2018 6:56:59 GMT -5
stunning poetry right here!
can u get any better?!
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Post by Sierra on Jul 14, 2018 6:58:38 GMT -5
every line tells and advances the vision, excellent writing!
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Post by Lola on Jul 14, 2018 7:10:59 GMT -5
damn girl, you know how to weave a masterpiece!
excellent job and good luck with your new collection 
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Post by Sharon on Jul 14, 2018 7:24:00 GMT -5
this is the ONE, this write is powerful, thanks for sharing and you better keep us posted on that new collection, love ya always
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Post by Reggie on Jul 14, 2018 7:35:18 GMT -5
I am always in awe of your writing style, Lisa but his one is astounding!
You are for sure a real one...you keep cranking out these gems and that new collection will be out in no time, god speed queen
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Post by Sara on Jul 14, 2018 7:56:00 GMT -5
this one encompassing it all and then some,,,fine writing!
this is my favorite part:
"soul is running on empty
searching for the unreal
trying to shut out all the clatter
called doubt and embrace faith in self
but it all will only turn around
if my belief is still on the real"
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Post by Brian on Jul 14, 2018 8:17:47 GMT -5
I am on board with everyone else, you always write fire dear lady!
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Post by Eddie on Jul 14, 2018 8:44:06 GMT -5
Lisa, you always prompt your readers to evoke emotion...exceptional writing as always
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Post by Carin on Jul 14, 2018 8:56:46 GMT -5
bold writing like always...excellent job!
this stanza resonates with me the most:
"around my wrists rests these
imaginary rusty chains, got to
shake em loose and so do you
yeah, I see you wearing them
too...the scars and scratches
these wicked chains have left
yes, you are wounded
just like me"
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 14, 2018 9:06:02 GMT -5
thanks so much everyone!
I deeply appreciate the reads and fine comments
I will keep you all updated on the progress 
love you all
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Post by Jack on Jul 14, 2018 12:42:01 GMT -5
tell it! well-done!
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Post by Toni on Jul 14, 2018 12:46:21 GMT -5
told with truth and depth of emotion, a fine write!
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Post by bridge on Jul 14, 2018 12:56:35 GMT -5
a solid and powerful poem from start to finish, love it!
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all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
