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Rose
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Wounded - new poem Jul 16, 2018 10:09:04 GMT -5

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Post by Rose on Jul 16, 2018 10:09:04 GMT -5

excellent poem!

this is my favorite stanza:

"around my wrists rests these
imaginary rusty chains, got to
shake em loose and so do you
yeah, I see you wearing them
too...the scars and scratches
these wicked chains have left
yes, you are wounded
just like me"

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Tamika Echoes Family Member Reggie's wife Posts: 858	Wounded - new poem Jul 16, 2018 13:53:06 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Tamika on Jul 16, 2018 13:53:06 GMT -5 Jul 14, 2018 19:29:08 GMT -5 Lisa Arnold said: many thanks everyone, I am so happy to have your support, much love to you all you are welcome back for another read, your poem is really speaking to me

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	Wounded - new poem Jul 16, 2018 14:26:14 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 16, 2018 14:26:14 GMT -5 thanks Charles, Rose and Tami Tami, I am so glad you are feeling this one as am I
	dreams echo within...

icee Echoes Family Member Veiled Emotions Friend of Echoes striving and reaching Posts: 661	Wounded - new poem Jul 16, 2018 21:23:37 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by icee on Jul 16, 2018 21:23:37 GMT -5 Jul 14, 2018 21:48:45 GMT -5 Lisa Arnold said: thanks icee!
	give of your soul

Kristi Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Posts: 677	Wounded - new poem Jul 17, 2018 8:25:43 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Kristi on Jul 17, 2018 8:25:43 GMT -5 well-done!
	looked within liked what I found

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Wounded - new poem Jul 17, 2018 9:13:56 GMT -5

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Post by bridge on Jul 17, 2018 9:13:56 GMT -5

excellent wrting

this part sticks with me

soul is running on empty
searching for the unreal
trying to shut out all the clatter
called doubt and embrace faith in self
but it all will only turn around
if my belief is still on the real

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Betty Haiku/Short Form Monitor[/size] Posts: 1,477	Wounded - new poem Jul 17, 2018 14:16:54 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Betty on Jul 17, 2018 14:16:54 GMT -5 read it again and I love it even more anim_32 animated-smileys-dancing-027

mark Echoes Senior Member Friend of Echoes Posts: 416	Wounded - new poem Jul 17, 2018 14:53:35 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by mark on Jul 17, 2018 14:53:35 GMT -5 sign0175 Lisa, you are writing some great new stuff
	my past is my business!

rico Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Posts: 542	Wounded - new poem Jul 17, 2018 16:52:54 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rico on Jul 17, 2018 16:52:54 GMT -5 solid writing

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	Wounded - new poem Jul 18, 2018 8:04:27 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 18, 2018 8:04:27 GMT -5 Jul 17, 2018 8:25:43 GMT -5 Kristi said: well-done! so much!
	dreams echo within...

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Wounded - new poem Jul 18, 2018 8:05:18 GMT -5

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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 18, 2018 8:05:18 GMT -5

Jul 17, 2018 9:13:56 GMT -5 bridge said:

excellent wrting

this part sticks with me
soul is running on empty
searching for the unreal
trying to shut out all the clatter
called doubt and embrace faith in self
but it all will only turn around
if my belief is still on the real

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Dan, it always good to hear from you

for the kind words

Last Edit: Jul 18, 2018 8:05:37 GMT -5 by Lisa Arnold

dreams echo within...

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	Wounded - new poem Jul 18, 2018 8:06:45 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 18, 2018 8:06:45 GMT -5 Jul 17, 2018 14:16:54 GMT -5 Betty said: read it again and I love it even more anim_32 animated-smileys-dancing-027 thank-you-smiley-animated-thankyousign, dear Betty
	dreams echo within...

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	Wounded - new poem Jul 18, 2018 8:07:29 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 18, 2018 8:07:29 GMT -5 Jul 17, 2018 14:53:35 GMT -5 mark said: sign0175 Lisa, you are writing some great new stuff
	dreams echo within...

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	Wounded - new poem Jul 18, 2018 8:08:03 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 18, 2018 8:08:03 GMT -5 Jul 17, 2018 16:52:54 GMT -5 rico said: solid writing thank-you-smiley-animated-thankyousign
	dreams echo within...

Jay Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes striving to believe Posts: 622	Wounded - new poem Jul 20, 2018 19:44:38 GMT -5 Lisa Arnold likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jay on Jul 20, 2018 19:44:38 GMT -5 wow, this is solid writing can't wait for your new collection