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Jay Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes striving to believe Posts: 622	SPELL MY NAME - slight revision Jul 27, 2018 18:46:36 GMT -5 Lisa Arnold likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jay on Jul 27, 2018 18:46:36 GMT -5 exquisite writing anim_32

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SPELL MY NAME - slight revision Jul 28, 2018 14:03:08 GMT -5 Lisa Arnold, Tina, and 1 more like this

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Post by Kristi on Jul 28, 2018 14:03:08 GMT -5

this is one solid piece of writing

love these lines:

"forgetting
the letters that
spell my name
hoping somebody
will, graciously, remember
who I am
before I'm gone
so it all will not have
been in vain"

©2018 Lisa Arnold

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sister, i already know how to spell your name...L.I.S.A A.R.N.O.L.D

looked within liked what I found

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SPELL MY NAME - slight revision Jul 28, 2018 15:09:04 GMT -5

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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 28, 2018 15:09:04 GMT -5

Jul 27, 2018 9:42:10 GMT -5 Rose said:

well-crafted poem

love these 2 stanzas

"faded rattle
train track trestle
stepping over
broken glass

hustle in my walk
rain dust on face
guided footsteps
stumble forward"

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so much Rose

dreams echo within...

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	SPELL MY NAME - slight revision Jul 28, 2018 15:10:10 GMT -5 Toni likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 28, 2018 15:10:10 GMT -5 Jul 27, 2018 14:27:13 GMT -5 Toni said: strong write I for one am damn sure gonna remember how to spell your name Toni
	dreams echo within...

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	SPELL MY NAME - slight revision Jul 28, 2018 15:11:03 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 28, 2018 15:11:03 GMT -5 Jul 27, 2018 15:19:58 GMT -5 Lee said: with Toni great poetry here my dear friend so much Lee
	dreams echo within...

Tina Lounge Moderator[/size] Finding Inner Peace Chasing Echoes Posts: 1,142	SPELL MY NAME - slight revision Jul 28, 2018 16:13:13 GMT -5 Lisa Arnold likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Tina on Jul 28, 2018 16:13:13 GMT -5 boldly written and honestly expressed
	"I'll never long for what might have been..." - Mark Tremonti

Tamika Echoes Family Member Reggie's wife Posts: 858	SPELL MY NAME - slight revision Jul 28, 2018 17:31:44 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Tamika on Jul 28, 2018 17:31:44 GMT -5 Jul 24, 2018 12:55:23 GMT -5 Lisa Arnold said: Jul 24, 2018 8:06:18 GMT -5 Tamika said: excellent writing Lisa many thanks to you dear Tami , like the changes u made since i last read it

Alicia Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Living Life! Posts: 883	SPELL MY NAME - slight revision Jul 28, 2018 22:14:28 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Alicia on Jul 28, 2018 22:14:28 GMT -5 Jul 24, 2018 20:23:08 GMT -5 Lisa Arnold said: Jul 24, 2018 16:29:28 GMT -5 Alicia said: sign0175 this is a quiet fire poetry dear Alicia and I love the changes u made to your poem

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	SPELL MY NAME - slight revision Jul 28, 2018 23:24:32 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 28, 2018 23:24:32 GMT -5 Jul 27, 2018 18:46:36 GMT -5 Jay said: exquisite writing anim_32 thanks so much Jay
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SPELL MY NAME - slight revision Jul 28, 2018 23:25:48 GMT -5

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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 28, 2018 23:25:48 GMT -5

Jul 28, 2018 14:03:08 GMT -5 Kristi said:

this is one solid piece of writing

love these lines:

"forgetting
the letters that
spell my name
hoping somebody
will, graciously, remember
who I am
before I'm gone
so it all will not have
been in vain"

©2018 Lisa Arnold

Read more: echoes64.proboards.com/thread/17006/spell-name-slight-revision#ixzz5MZrPWzi7
sister, i already know how to spell your name...L.I.S.A A.R.N.O.L.D

sign0175 Kristi, you floored me with this response, love you

dreams echo within...

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	SPELL MY NAME - slight revision Jul 28, 2018 23:26:37 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 28, 2018 23:26:37 GMT -5 Jul 28, 2018 16:13:13 GMT -5 Tina said: boldly written and honestly expressed Tina
	dreams echo within...

Bob Moderator[/size] Haiku Enthusiast! Forever hoping Posts: 2,487	SPELL MY NAME - slight revision Jul 29, 2018 0:33:31 GMT -5 Lisa Arnold likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Bob on Jul 29, 2018 0:33:31 GMT -5 you've made quite a bit of changes to your poem since I read it last, good additions
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SPELL MY NAME - slight revision Jul 29, 2018 12:34:00 GMT -5

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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 29, 2018 12:34:00 GMT -5

Jul 29, 2018 0:33:31 GMT -5 Bob said:

you've made quite a bit of changes to your poem since I read it last, good additions

for giving it another I much appreciate you taking the time to comment on my poem

dreams echo within...

mark Echoes Senior Member Friend of Echoes Posts: 416	SPELL MY NAME - slight revision Aug 2, 2018 21:32:14 GMT -5 Lisa Arnold likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by mark on Aug 2, 2018 21:32:14 GMT -5 this one has it all
	my past is my business!

icee Echoes Family Member Veiled Emotions Friend of Echoes striving and reaching Posts: 661	SPELL MY NAME - slight revision Aug 2, 2018 22:10:37 GMT -5 Lisa Arnold likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by icee on Aug 2, 2018 22:10:37 GMT -5 you did a great job with this here write
	give of your soul