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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 30, 2018 13:58:25 GMT -5
EMERGE
watching
clock tick
on dusty shelf
in vain she waits
for proof of life
to, finally, emerge
©2018 Lisa Arnold
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Post by Joan on Jul 30, 2018 14:37:07 GMT -5
solid piece you got here 
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Post by Reggie on Jul 30, 2018 14:40:50 GMT -5
well-expressed piece ssig_great_100-101 writing
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 30, 2018 15:19:36 GMT -5
solid piece you got here  Joan! |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 30, 2018 15:20:08 GMT -5
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Post by Betty on Jul 30, 2018 16:03:21 GMT -5
 excellent write
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Post by rico on Jul 30, 2018 16:17:16 GMT -5
your poetry is always engaging and well-crafted ssig_great_100-101 write
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Post by Joy on Jul 30, 2018 16:23:39 GMT -5
u weave a picture so well in all your poems, excellent job here 
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Post by Cherrie on Jul 30, 2018 16:51:27 GMT -5
you paint a story so well in this great write
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Post by Rose on Jul 30, 2018 17:10:25 GMT -5
strength of words in this piece emerges boldly and clearly
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Post by Tamika on Jul 30, 2018 17:35:30 GMT -5
a wonderfully expressed gem of a poem
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Post by Sierra on Jul 30, 2018 18:36:00 GMT -5
ssig_great_100-101 writing Lisa
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Post by Alicia on Jul 30, 2018 21:30:51 GMT -5
ssig_great_100-101 poem!
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Post by Bob on Jul 30, 2018 22:38:46 GMT -5
i like your short poems, well-done
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Post by Sharon on Jul 30, 2018 23:21:20 GMT -5
a great piece of writing, paints an entire picture 
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Joan!
excellent write 
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
