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Post by Lisa Arnold on Aug 15, 2018 10:56:03 GMT -5
Burnt Ember Dreams
taste bitter sin on slip of tongue succulent winds churn burnt ember dreams veiled ashes paint vacant city streets
©2018 Lisa Arnold
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Post by Tina on Aug 15, 2018 11:12:20 GMT -5
strong write that speaks volumes
for posting
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Post by Percy1 on Aug 15, 2018 11:38:35 GMT -5
you do write short-form poetry well
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Post by Reggie on Aug 15, 2018 13:15:08 GMT -5
very well-expressed
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Post by Alicia on Aug 15, 2018 13:56:10 GMT -5
this is some write
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Aug 15, 2018 14:03:28 GMT -5
Tina!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Aug 15, 2018 14:03:53 GMT -5
you do write short-form poetry well Percy!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Aug 15, 2018 14:04:28 GMT -5
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Aug 15, 2018 14:05:02 GMT -5
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Post by Sara on Aug 15, 2018 14:20:27 GMT -5
i love the little
fantastic poem
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Post by Sierra on Aug 15, 2018 14:44:50 GMT -5
a fine job, love it
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Aug 15, 2018 15:01:29 GMT -5
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Aug 15, 2018 15:02:00 GMT -5
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Post by Tamika on Aug 15, 2018 19:54:36 GMT -5
i love this piece from you
strong imagery
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Post by bridge on Aug 15, 2018 20:18:21 GMT -5
a very well-crafted poem
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