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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 18, 2021 8:53:53 GMT -5
crisp winds
rupture silence
water edges over ridge
dawn awakens warm morning sun
black coffee steams in mug
©2021 Lisa Arnold
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Post by Sierra on May 18, 2021 10:24:46 GMT -5
well done, great flow and imagery 
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Post by Lola on May 18, 2021 14:34:09 GMT -5
perfectly written, nice write 
sounds like my morning today 
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 18, 2021 14:48:41 GMT -5
 Sierra and Lola 
Lola, I love waking up and watching the sunrise while sipping coffee 
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Post by Betty on May 18, 2021 16:31:03 GMT -5
yes, I was sitting on my balcony and sipping coffee from my favorite mug yesterday, beautiful poetry Lisa
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Post by mark on May 18, 2021 16:44:05 GMT -5
a sweet jewel and solidly written poem |
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Post by Reggie on May 18, 2021 17:07:28 GMT -5
well written laced with sharp imagery that tells the story
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Post by Sara on May 18, 2021 17:37:15 GMT -5
beautifully expressed piece, I like it much
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Post by Percy1 on May 18, 2021 19:24:15 GMT -5
great pensee
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 19, 2021 11:36:23 GMT -5
 very much for stopping by and leaving your kind comments Betty, Mark, Reg, Sara and Percy
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Post by Brianna on May 19, 2021 13:29:36 GMT -5
solid imagery and well told
great read
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Post by rico on May 19, 2021 14:18:07 GMT -5
a very strongly presented pensee 
for the post
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Post by icee on May 19, 2021 23:56:54 GMT -5
Like this much, good write 🙂
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 20, 2021 15:54:09 GMT -5
Bri, Rico and icee
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Sierra and Lola 
very much for stopping by and leaving your kind comments Betty, Mark, Reg, Sara and Percy 
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
