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Post by Daboetry on May 5, 2006 20:34:15 GMT -5
Hello everyone, some of you may know that my book "The Chronicles of Daboetry" came out a few months back. Well I just received my first "review" on amazon.com by the Brilliant Brian Young. I was so "elated" that i just had to share it with you all. Wannabe Poet, May 3, 2006 Reviewer: Brian Young (Queens) - See all my reviews This is the most insane thing I have seen, a "NU KIND OF POETRY" You created you own style, huh. First of all learn how to use the English language properly, before you even try to move on to the poetic language. you sound like a rapper not a poet, this is a disgrace to the world of poetry. Don't go claiming you created your own style, when you description reads like that. A poet is one of fine literature, a master of the English language, not street slang. Please, get this book out of here!!! You gotta him..and the rest of them haters..LMAO!!
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Post by chitcyn on May 5, 2006 23:06:18 GMT -5
his review itself had grammatical errors...lol
"You created you own style, huh." "Don't go claiming you created your own style, when you description reads like that."
ain't that "you" supposed to be "your"? look who's talking?...lol
Amen to so good ppl who are so perfect yet could not even spell the word p-e-r-f-e-c-t
My friend, a struggling poet doesnt easily concede but the more he's bruised, the braver and daring he becomes.
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Post by Daboetry on May 5, 2006 23:17:44 GMT -5
Yes Ma'am..my feelings exactly..that's why i posted this award winning review on most of the poetry sites i know..lmaooooooooooo. Just to show what an ass he is and that he can't break me. He's just a hater...and can't deal with it.
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Post by Daboetry on May 6, 2006 13:26:10 GMT -5
For anyone's who's interested, my comment has just been posted on amazon.com..lmaooo. Dayum i feel so proud.lmao.
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Post by rrw on May 11, 2006 17:44:05 GMT -5
He's a funny man! Clowns like that are a dime a dozen! Ooooops! I used slang. If you run into the guy again you might inform the poor dude (ooops! I did again!,,, AND AGAIIIIIN!) That rap IS poetry and slang IS poetry! Shakespeare used slang (well, Mr. Young may not like Shakespeare) AND in AMERICA we don't speak English! We speak American.
The problem with guys like this is they more interested in the opinion than the work of the artist. It's a shame really. But non-artists (that's probably slang too) have a hard time understanding anyone other than themselves. DA, you know what I think of your work.
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Post by Daboetry on May 11, 2006 19:09:23 GMT -5
Amen R, Thanks sweetie. You've very right and I couldn't have said it better. He hasn't broken me, all that hateration is my fuel to keep going.
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