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Post by Lisa Arnold on Dec 14, 2004 6:06:30 GMT -5
Here is one I wrote a few days ago ;D
lake loon's call
awakens me as I sleep
alongside river's edge
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Post by Tina on Dec 14, 2004 6:49:07 GMT -5
Hi Lisa, very vivid, nice work  |
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Post by Brian on Dec 14, 2004 7:08:17 GMT -5
I agree withTina, it is very vividly written, nice ;D
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Post by Seashellstarz on Dec 14, 2004 10:08:18 GMT -5
It's very imagination-provoking. (I don't you if you know what I mean. I talk strangely at times. 
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Dec 14, 2004 15:08:59 GMT -5
Hey all,   for commenting  Yeah Shellz, I got what you were saying ;D |
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Post by Sharon on Dec 15, 2004 5:43:59 GMT -5
Hey Lisa,
Very imaginative piece ;D
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Post by Cherrie on Dec 15, 2004 5:56:19 GMT -5
Very nicely expressed |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Dec 15, 2004 16:26:05 GMT -5
Sharon and Cherrie
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Post by Helen on Dec 15, 2004 17:55:21 GMT -5
Lisa, you wrote another great one ;D
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Post by Dana on Dec 16, 2004 5:10:04 GMT -5
well done |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Dec 16, 2004 17:39:34 GMT -5
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for commenting 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
Hello everyone, sorry I have been away from the site so long but I was swamped with work 
Aug 5, 2021 14:19:11 GMT -5
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Hello everyone, sorry I have been away from the site so long but I was swamped with work 
Aug 5, 2021 14:19:11 GMT -5
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