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Post by Helen on Dec 21, 2004 17:58:07 GMT -5
What do you all think? ;D
warm summer winds
sand between my toes
I wish I wasn't alone[/img][/center]
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Post by Brian on Dec 21, 2004 18:18:40 GMT -5
Nice one, Helen   for sharing your work with us  |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Dec 22, 2004 16:46:53 GMT -5
Hi Helen, I like this one 
Just as a suggestion how about something like:
warm summer winds
blow sand between my toes
I long not to be alone
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Post by Jay on Dec 23, 2004 5:05:52 GMT -5
Hi, I like this one, nice job
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Post by Seashellstarz on Dec 23, 2004 13:52:13 GMT -5
Great poem!  |
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Post by Sharon on Jan 10, 2005 4:28:34 GMT -5
CONGRATS on the Silver Star Award Great write! 
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Post by Toni on Jan 10, 2005 4:59:23 GMT -5
Congrats, Helen
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Post by Jay on Jan 10, 2005 5:58:09 GMT -5
Congrats Helen |
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Post by Helen on Jan 10, 2005 7:10:17 GMT -5
THANKS for the award and for the congrats  |
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Post by Cherrie on Jan 10, 2005 19:52:06 GMT -5
Congrats Helen Great write! |
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Post by Seashellstarz on Jan 15, 2005 11:14:37 GMT -5
Congrats Helen! ;D |
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for sharing your work with us 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
Hello everyone, sorry I have been away from the site so long but I was swamped with work 
Aug 5, 2021 14:19:11 GMT -5
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Hello everyone, sorry I have been away from the site so long but I was swamped with work 
Aug 5, 2021 14:19:11 GMT -5
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