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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 28, 2006 3:30:42 GMT -5
BOURBON BRUISED SKYLINE
bourbon bruised skyline
seaside midnight love lust
alone come sunrise
�2006 Lisa Arnold [/color][/size]
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Post by MoonMuse on Feb 28, 2006 5:29:22 GMT -5
meloncholic image, very beautiful and I like the aliteration. Good one!
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Post by Sara on Feb 28, 2006 7:25:07 GMT -5
very nice, Lisa!
love that first line...
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 28, 2006 8:27:17 GMT -5
thanks so much, Karen and Sara, I much appreciate the read and comments:)
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Post by Charles on Mar 1, 2006 10:16:57 GMT -5
great job, I love this!
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Post by Alicia on Mar 1, 2006 20:12:12 GMT -5
nice, I love the flow of this, very visual
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Post by Bob on Mar 1, 2006 23:11:36 GMT -5
beautifully done, Lisa!
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Post by MoonMuse on Mar 2, 2006 1:16:31 GMT -5
Congrats, enjoy your award Lisa  |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 5, 2006 18:07:00 GMT -5
thanks everyone for the kind words and many thanks for the award!
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Post by Tamika on Mar 31, 2011 10:30:35 GMT -5
love it Lisa, good  this well-crafted haiku from you! |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 31, 2011 10:31:42 GMT -5
thanks Tami, I am so glad you enjoyed it! |
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Post by Tamika on Mar 31, 2011 10:32:06 GMT -5
for sure Lisa, have a great day, it's back to work for me:)
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 31, 2011 10:34:02 GMT -5
OK Tami, you havea great day too...I better get back to writing too!
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Post by rico on Mar 31, 2011 11:23:00 GMT -5
perfection Lisa, nice to read this one!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 31, 2011 12:09:51 GMT -5
thanks Rico!
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this well-crafted haiku from you!
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
