Tradtional Haiku challenge

Lola Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Michelle Obama Posts: 753	Tradtional Haiku challenge Feb 17, 2009 7:18:43 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lola on Feb 17, 2009 7:18:43 GMT -5 hi everyone, I got a challenge for you haiku writers: write a traditonal haiku (5-7-5) using one of these three words in each line.... broken silent horizon

Lola Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Michelle Obama Posts: 753	Tradtional Haiku challenge Feb 17, 2009 7:23:26 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lola on Feb 17, 2009 7:23:26 GMT -5 beyond horizon broken silhouette dances silent moon rises

Sierra Echoes Family Member Posts: 847	Tradtional Haiku challenge Feb 17, 2009 7:26:36 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sierra on Feb 17, 2009 7:26:36 GMT -5 good challenge and poem Lola! I will revisit this later on, I have to get to work, lol have a great day!

Sierra Echoes Family Member Posts: 847	Tradtional Haiku challenge Feb 17, 2009 7:39:17 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sierra on Feb 17, 2009 7:39:17 GMT -5 I wrote this a few minutes ago: broken door ajar moonlight over horizon night winds blow silent now I am off to work
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icee Echoes Family Member Veiled Emotions Friend of Echoes striving and reaching Posts: 661	Tradtional Haiku challenge Feb 17, 2009 7:47:24 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by icee on Feb 17, 2009 7:47:24 GMT -5 these are both good Lola and Sierra!
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Tradtional Haiku challenge Feb 17, 2009 8:17:19 GMT -5

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Post by johan on Feb 17, 2009 8:17:19 GMT -5

Hi Jan, hope I'm not too late.

silent cobalt sky
meeting the broken ocean
horizon of sight.

Johan

Last Edit: Feb 17, 2009 8:19:25 GMT -5 by johan

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Tradtional Haiku challenge Feb 17, 2009 9:55:37 GMT -5

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Post by sunny on Feb 17, 2009 9:55:37 GMT -5

Feb 17, 2009 7:18:43 GMT -5 Lola said:

hi everyone,

I got a challenge for you haiku writers:

write a traditonal haiku (5-7-5) using one of these three words in each line....

broken

silent

horizon

broken flower vase

silent petals tears dripping

sorrow horizon

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Last Edit: Feb 17, 2009 22:57:51 GMT -5 by sunny

immusie Echoes Family Member Posts: 3,485	Tradtional Haiku challenge Feb 17, 2009 17:59:40 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by immusie on Feb 17, 2009 17:59:40 GMT -5 Silent falls the night broken are the tears of dreams horizon beckons
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tritran Guest	Tradtional Haiku challenge Feb 17, 2009 19:19:40 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by tritran on Feb 17, 2009 19:19:40 GMT -5 Morning has broken, Melting the silent, cold night On the horizon.

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Tradtional Haiku challenge Feb 18, 2009 6:44:46 GMT -5

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Post by cdlight on Feb 18, 2009 6:44:46 GMT -5

Feb 17, 2009 7:18:43 GMT -5 Lola said:

hi everyone,

I got a challenge for you haiku writers:

write a traditonal haiku (5-7-5) using one of these three words in each line....

broken

silent

horizon

I'm Hit

My body broken
Sun fades on sand horizons
My weapon's silent

Last Edit: Feb 18, 2009 6:46:43 GMT -5 by cdlight

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Jay Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes striving to believe Posts: 622	Tradtional Haiku challenge Feb 19, 2009 0:29:02 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jay on Feb 19, 2009 0:29:02 GMT -5 these are all great haiku!!

b4sunset Echoes Family Member Posts: 7,378	Tradtional Haiku challenge Feb 19, 2009 1:16:40 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by b4sunset on Feb 19, 2009 1:16:40 GMT -5 I'm a haiku fanatic.. may i share? broken silent tears mopping floors of damned damned dreams horizon won't come

Sierra Echoes Family Member Posts: 847	Tradtional Haiku challenge Feb 19, 2009 9:01:47 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sierra on Feb 19, 2009 9:01:47 GMT -5 fine work by everyone!!

b4sunset Echoes Family Member Posts: 7,378	Tradtional Haiku challenge Feb 20, 2009 0:31:01 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by b4sunset on Feb 20, 2009 0:31:01 GMT -5 If you will allow me, sierra, can i be the one to post the next 3 words??/ lantern blowing roads MY HAIKU: lantern stones,graceful like you, blowing desert winds on roads floating wet

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	Tradtional Haiku challenge Feb 20, 2009 7:21:22 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 20, 2009 7:21:22 GMT -5 good challenge Lola, here's mine:) broken reflection cold waters ripple, silent morning horizon
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