Another Traditional Haiku Challenge

Sierra
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Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 21, 2009 9:38:42 GMT -5

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Post by Sierra on Feb 21, 2009 9:38:42 GMT -5

hey bridge, I didnt forget about yours, took me awhile to get to it

here is goes:

cold glass of mirror
reflects sorrow’s bated breath
roses wilt in vase

Lisa, bridge, b4, sunny, cd, immusie I love your poems and yours too Lola!!

Last Edit: Feb 21, 2009 9:39:51 GMT -5 by Sierra

Dana Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes beginning again Posts: 983	Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 21, 2009 10:12:14 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Dana on Feb 21, 2009 10:12:14 GMT -5 great job sierra!!!

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Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 21, 2009 10:14:19 GMT -5

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Post by sunny on Feb 21, 2009 10:14:19 GMT -5

Feb 21, 2009 9:38:42 GMT -5 Sierra said:

hey bridge, I didnt forget about yours, took me awhile to get to it

here is goes:

cold glass of mirror
reflects sorrow’s bated breath
roses wilt in vase

Lisa, bridge, b4, sunny, cd, immusie I love your poems and yours too Lola!!

;DThanks sierra! I love yours too! and love everyone else too --- Lisa, bridge, b4, cd, immusie.... LOVE ALL ! ;D

Dana Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes beginning again Posts: 983	Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 21, 2009 10:14:37 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Dana on Feb 21, 2009 10:14:37 GMT -5 bridge, Lisa, b4 your poems are fantastic!!

Cherrie Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Loving This Beautiful Life Posts: 1,002	Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 22, 2009 4:28:24 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Cherrie on Feb 22, 2009 4:28:24 GMT -5 wow bridge, b4 and Lisa, great stuff!! love eveyone's poems!
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Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 22, 2009 5:22:44 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 22, 2009 5:22:44 GMT -5 many thanks Dana and Cherrie!!
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Joan
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Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 22, 2009 12:10:07 GMT -5

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Post by Joan on Feb 22, 2009 12:10:07 GMT -5

Feb 21, 2009 9:38:42 GMT -5 Sierra said:

hey bridge, I didnt forget about yours, took me awhile to get to it

here is goes:

cold glass of mirror
reflects sorrow’s bated breath
roses wilt in vase

Lisa, bridge, b4, sunny, cd, immusie I love your poems and yours too Lola!!

good job

Joan Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Posts: 863	Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 22, 2009 12:12:46 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Joan on Feb 22, 2009 12:12:46 GMT -5 Feb 21, 2009 1:56:32 GMT -5 Lola said: pink roses in vase her stark mirror image pales with her fading breath love this

Joan Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Posts: 863	Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 22, 2009 12:15:42 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Joan on Feb 22, 2009 12:15:42 GMT -5 Feb 20, 2009 17:51:12 GMT -5 immusie said: Vase filled with sunshine mirror projects her spirit breath taken away well done, immusie

b4sunset
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Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 23, 2009 11:20:33 GMT -5

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Post by b4sunset on Feb 23, 2009 11:20:33 GMT -5

I can't get enough of all of you, lola, musie dear, bridge, lisa, sierra and EVERYONE i may have forgotten.. dang!!

Again, will you permit me to use other words??

ponds

heavy

spin
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my simple take on this:

shrines of ponds possess
delicate warm hues spinning
waxing stems, heavy

Last Edit: Feb 24, 2009 2:22:38 GMT -5 by b4sunset

cdlight Echoes Family Member One Lord, One faith, One baptism, Eph 4:5 Posts: 644	Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 23, 2009 16:22:59 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by cdlight on Feb 23, 2009 16:22:59 GMT -5 lush lily pads spin from heavy, fat frightened frogs ceasing ponds slumber
	Last Edit: Feb 23, 2009 16:25:21 GMT -5 by cdlight Ephesians 2:8- For by grace are ye saved through faith; and that not of yourselves: it is the gift of God: Not of works, lest any man should boast.

sunny Echoes Family Member Posts: 6,065	Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 24, 2009 1:47:47 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sunny on Feb 24, 2009 1:47:47 GMT -5 blushed lady pond fallen leaves are spinning heavy emotion
	Last Edit: Feb 24, 2009 1:53:10 GMT -5 by sunny

b4sunset Echoes Family Member Posts: 7,378	Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 24, 2009 2:24:24 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by b4sunset on Feb 24, 2009 2:24:24 GMT -5 Sunny, you really get me, wow! thanks, CD

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 24, 2009 12:57:16 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 24, 2009 12:57:16 GMT -5 great words b4, here is my take on them: winds ripple through pond heavy rains begin to fall as leaves twist and spin
	Last Edit: Feb 24, 2009 12:58:09 GMT -5 by Lisa Arnold dreams echo within...

sunny Echoes Family Member Posts: 6,065	Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 24, 2009 23:39:31 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sunny on Feb 24, 2009 23:39:31 GMT -5 Feb 24, 2009 2:24:24 GMT -5 b4sunset said: Sunny, you really get me, wow! thanks, CD what what??.......??