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Post by Brian on Feb 26, 2009 4:46:25 GMT -5
great words b4, here is my take on them: winds ripple through pond heavy rains begin to fall as leaves twist and spin great write, Lisa  |
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Post by b4sunset on Feb 26, 2009 9:20:41 GMT -5
i mean.. you got me really feling good with your gift, sunny pal!  |
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Post by immusie on Feb 26, 2009 17:42:01 GMT -5
cd..your's is so cute and a hoot my friend! LOL
Just now getting to this one...here goes
Heavy weighs the mind
small pond lifts the spirits heart
spin the webs of dreams
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Post by sunny on Feb 26, 2009 22:17:46 GMT -5
i mean.. you got me really feling good with your gift, sunny pal! hey b4 Pal.... thanks for your kindness saying... I won't know what gift that you can see... I am just being myself... what ever gift you see, that is only through your eyes, so that my 'gift' as you said is valid. but for in my home, my work place... or say.. what ever and where ever I be... no body ever mention that I have such gift like you say to me.... I have not notise that I have what 'gift'?!!!! heeee... oh.. well... I am happy enough if my friend told me that I have gift like you tell me! that is happy enough for me to live on!!!!!!!!!!!! haaaaaaaaaaaaa,,, my gift is only have its life when with you, or with friends here, without here, I have no gift at all! haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa thank you very much my friend and my poetry Pal! when I with you or with friends here, I feel as if a fish jump into the water! can swim freely and alively!!! so very energy! but otherwise, where ever I go or do, I feel as if a fish put on the dry land,.... can not move, can not swim... can not breath... just slowly dry out... heeeeeeeeeeee uew... what a picture b4! haaaaaaaa if I really have gift as you clam... my friend, I surely will share my gift with you ok! or say to you, take it! you can have what I have ! we are friends! haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa hugs! |
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Post by bridge on Feb 27, 2009 5:18:39 GMT -5
great words b4, here is my take on them: winds ripple through pond heavy rains begin to fall as leaves twist and spin good poem Lisa, very vivid |
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Post by immusie on Mar 2, 2009 15:02:39 GMT -5
bridge..thank you for commenting on mine.....
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Post by bridge on May 2, 2009 4:37:53 GMT -5
bridge..thank you for commenting on mine..... you're very welcome musie  |
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Post by icee on Jun 7, 2010 6:44:01 GMT -5
wonderful job echoes!
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echoes, hope you all are doing well 
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