Another Traditional Haiku Challenge

bridge
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Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 20, 2009 8:05:46 GMT -5

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Post by bridge on Feb 20, 2009 8:05:46 GMT -5

Hey all,

I liked the other 3 word traditonal haiku challenge and thought I would post one of my own:

write a traditional haiku using one of these 3 once in each line and in any order

mirror
vase
breath

hope you have fun

bridge Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Posts: 883	Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 20, 2009 8:09:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bridge on Feb 20, 2009 8:09:20 GMT -5 old dusty mirror red rose in porcelain vase breath of morning wakes

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 20, 2009 8:55:48 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 20, 2009 8:55:48 GMT -5 your haiku is very vivid, nice job! here's mine bridge! mirror reflects broken vase on wooden floor gasp of breath taken
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Brian Echoes Family Member LonePoet Friend of Echoes Searching for my mind Posts: 1,140	Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 20, 2009 9:08:06 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Brian on Feb 20, 2009 9:08:06 GMT -5 love yours bridge! Lisa yours is great too!! thanks for sharing
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Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 20, 2009 9:12:33 GMT -5

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Post by sunny on Feb 20, 2009 9:12:33 GMT -5

you all are so gooooooooooood! now I am hesitate to write it.... as if I walk in a wrong door...is not for me.... haaaaaaaaaaa well... too late to go back... I'll try.. please excuse me... if I can not reach yours level ok...

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Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 20, 2009 9:24:08 GMT -5

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Post by sunny on Feb 20, 2009 9:24:08 GMT -5

Feb 20, 2009 8:05:46 GMT -5 bridge said:

Hey all,

I liked the other 3 word traditonal haiku challenge and thought I would post one of my own:

write a traditional haiku using one of these 3 once in each line and in any order

mirror
vase
breath

hope you have fun

shattered mirror piece

surrounding a vase of rose

thousands reflected breath

b4sunset Echoes Family Member Posts: 7,378	Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 20, 2009 10:07:30 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by b4sunset on Feb 20, 2009 10:07:30 GMT -5 sweet breath floating white pools of mirror melting moon a part of love's vase

percy Echoes Family Member Wading Deep Waters Friend of Echoes Posts: 787	Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 20, 2009 13:17:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by percy on Feb 20, 2009 13:17:13 GMT -5 bridge, Lisa. sunny and b4, you all wrote some great poems!!

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Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 20, 2009 14:14:27 GMT -5

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Post by cdlight on Feb 20, 2009 14:14:27 GMT -5

Feb 20, 2009 8:05:46 GMT -5 bridge said:

Hey all,

I liked the other 3 word traditonal haiku challenge and thought I would post one of my own:

write a traditional haiku using one of these 3 once in each line and in any order

mirror
vase
breath

hope you have fun

mirror reflects joy
placing roses in a vase
she draws a deep breath

Ephesians 2:8-

For by grace are ye saved through faith; and that not of yourselves: it is the gift of God: Not of works, lest any man should boast.

immusie Echoes Family Member Posts: 3,485	Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 20, 2009 17:51:12 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by immusie on Feb 20, 2009 17:51:12 GMT -5 Vase filled with sunshine mirror projects her spirit breath taken away
	Have a Happy Haunting Halloween All!!

sunny Echoes Family Member Posts: 6,065	Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 20, 2009 23:24:27 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sunny on Feb 20, 2009 23:24:27 GMT -5 Feb 20, 2009 13:17:13 GMT -5 percy said: bridge, Lisa. sunny and b4, you all wrote some great poems!! thank you percy! you are very kind!

sunny Echoes Family Member Posts: 6,065	Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 20, 2009 23:26:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sunny on Feb 20, 2009 23:26:13 GMT -5 Feb 20, 2009 13:17:13 GMT -5 percy said: bridge, Lisa. sunny and b4, you all wrote some great poems!! thank you again percy! you are very kind !

Dana Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes beginning again Posts: 983	Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 21, 2009 1:40:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Dana on Feb 21, 2009 1:40:20 GMT -5 Lisa and everyone your poems are wonderful!! such talent you all have!

Lola Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Michelle Obama Posts: 753	Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 21, 2009 1:56:32 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lola on Feb 21, 2009 1:56:32 GMT -5 pink roses in vase her stark mirror image pales with her fading breath

bridge Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Posts: 883	Another Traditional Haiku Challenge Feb 21, 2009 7:29:12 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bridge on Feb 21, 2009 7:29:12 GMT -5 great responses everyone! Lola, I love your second line!