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Post by ken on Feb 22, 2009 7:33:18 GMT -5
I will try it too dark skyline winter storm footprints left in snow
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Post by cdlight on Feb 22, 2009 7:33:54 GMT -5
you all are great at this!! Lisa, you posted a great pic to enhance your poem! I will give it a try cold water from faucet satiates my thirst I think this one is my favorite thus far
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Post by Reggie on Feb 22, 2009 7:44:20 GMT -5
wow, Lisa, bob, jaon, sierra, heart2heart, bridge and ken yours are great!! these seem fun, I am going to give it go as well... wine glass full and raised in a love toast to you
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 22, 2009 8:01:46 GMT -5
thanks everyone!! good stuff from you all, sometimes this "quickie" forms get the creative juices flowing, mine have been dry for a while, lol I will post one more and then I am off to run some errands: born into nothingness held by hands of fear [/b] have a great day all!!
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Post by Cyndi on Feb 22, 2009 8:14:41 GMT -5
wow, these are all very good! I love these poems because even though they are brief they often have much meaning and depth. Lisa yours are great!! here is mine: lost within my own thoughts searching for an end
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Post by Joan on Feb 22, 2009 8:25:19 GMT -5
wow, it seems many of you like this prompt, I am glad, I thought I would get about two or three repsonses. Lisa and anyone else post as many as you want, no pressure I just posted this prompt for fun and it looks like it was a hit, lol
you have a great day too Lisa!!
great poems everybody!!
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Post by sunny on Feb 22, 2009 8:36:20 GMT -5
dawn white fog floating lights calling of mind dream
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Post by Eddie on Feb 22, 2009 8:38:52 GMT -5
like what all of you have written!! here's what I came up with, lol toss of coin roll of dice "snake eyes" luck ran out ]
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Post by cdlight on Feb 22, 2009 10:49:28 GMT -5
like what all of you have written!! here's what I came up with, lol toss of coin roll of dice "snake eyes" luck ran out ] I like this one too
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Post by Carin on Feb 22, 2009 11:26:05 GMT -5
wow, joan this was a good iea, Lisa, I love all three of yours!! and everyone's are just great! I will try my hand at it: dark city streets frozen winter storm's black ice [/center]
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Post by Treasure on Feb 22, 2009 11:34:35 GMT -5
thanks everyone!! good stuff from you all, sometimes this "quickie" forms get the creative juices flowing, mine have been dry for a while, lol I will post one more and then I am off to run some errands: born into nothingness held by hands of fear [/b] have a great day all!![/quote] yeah I know what you mean, these and haiku are great for gettting the juices going and youy certainly have seemed to get the rust off dear Lisa you have a great day too and love this one from you and the other two as well
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Post by Treasure on Feb 22, 2009 11:37:43 GMT -5
here's mine: brush strokes on canvas show the grace of his face
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Post by Joan on Feb 22, 2009 12:01:27 GMT -5
great poems, ken, Lisa, reggie, cd, cyndi, eddie, carin and treasure!!
and everyone else I misssed, lol
sunny, I like yours but the correct form is 1,2,3,4,1 syallales, yours is 2,2,6,7,1
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Post by Billy on Feb 22, 2009 16:54:58 GMT -5
well, I will try it, I mostly write nonfiction but here it goes, be kind, lol blind eyes do not witness what is before them
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Post by Dana on Feb 22, 2009 17:11:26 GMT -5
Joan, great idea
I love lantunre poems too, Bob
here's mine:
cross of my faith dangles from uncertain hands
[/size][/b] [/center][/quote] great job love the picture
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