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Post by Dana on Feb 22, 2009 17:12:44 GMT -5
thanks joan, bridge, eddie and sara!  love your poems guys  bob, sierra and cherrie great poems  Jan, I love your image and poem as well I wanted to post another one, hope you don't mind, Joan   gusts
of waves
propels mist
off of eastern
sea [/color][/b] [/quote] beautifully penned |
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Post by Dana on Feb 22, 2009 17:16:49 GMT -5
his
vacant
eyes hold a
secret no one
knows |
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Post by sunny on Feb 22, 2009 22:28:00 GMT -5
great poems, ken, Lisa, reggie, cd, cyndi, eddie, carin and treasure!! and everyone else I misssed, lol sunny, I like yours but the correct form is 1,2,3,4,1 syallales, yours is 2,2,6,7,1 dear Joan, thank you very much for teaching me! how is this one? dawn white fog floating lights calling of mind dream let me know if it still not correct ok? I will change it to correct! thank you very much again Joan! hugs! |
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Post by icee on Feb 23, 2009 1:14:17 GMT -5
Lisa, Dana and sunny, you all wrote fine lanturnes and yes Sunny you have the correct form now:) here's mine: strength
of me
lost within
the echo of
doubt [/center] |
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Post by Jay on Feb 23, 2009 6:02:34 GMT -5
great poems by everyone!!  dana, lisa. sunny and icee, these are great!! I love this form too, don;t see it often enough, let me give it a try: clouds
cover
blue slyline
sunlight peers
through |
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Post by Sierra on Feb 23, 2009 6:39:36 GMT -5
great poems!
jay good to see you here!
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Post by Joan on Feb 23, 2009 8:31:13 GMT -5
great poems, ken, Lisa, reggie, cd, cyndi, eddie, carin and treasure!! and everyone else I misssed, lol sunny, I like yours but the correct form is 1,2,3,4,1 syallales, yours is 2,2,6,7,1 dear Joan, thank you very much for teaching me! how is this one? dawn white fog floating lights calling of mind dream let me know if it still not correct ok? I will change it to correct! thank you very much again Joan! hugs! hi sunny, you are welcome and yes you now have the correct form great poem  |
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Post by Sara on Feb 23, 2009 10:47:06 GMT -5
Joan, great idea
I love lantunre poems too, Bob
here's mine:
cross
of my
faith dangles
from uncertain
hands
[/size][/b] [/center][/quote] wow this is great Lisa |
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Post by Sara on Feb 23, 2009 10:49:16 GMT -5
well, I will try it, I mostly write nonfiction but here it goes, be kind, lol blind
eyes can
not witness
what lies before
them hi billy my hubby love this one and so true |
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Post by Sara on Feb 23, 2009 10:54:42 GMT -5
i wanted to try this too... cold
bowl of
chicken soup
is child’s only
meal
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Post by Cyndi on Feb 23, 2009 12:13:36 GMT -5
wow sara that is a sad one and unfortunatly a true statemnt for many of our youth, good job!
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Post by cdlight on Feb 23, 2009 16:06:13 GMT -5
Keep up the good work everyone...
Welcome to the site Cyndi
CD
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Post by Joan on Feb 23, 2009 20:59:05 GMT -5
thanks for responding everyone, great work by you all!!
Sara, yours is poignant, thanks for sharing
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Post by Cyndi on Feb 23, 2009 21:51:33 GMT -5
Keep up the good work everyone... Welcome to the site Cyndi CD  thanks for the welcome, CD but I have been a member since 2005, I just don’t post often…I visit hte site almost every day though |
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Post by sunny on Feb 23, 2009 23:04:45 GMT -5
Lisa, Dana and sunny, you all wrote fine lanturnes and yes Sunny you have the correct form now:) here's mine: strength
of me
lost within
the echo of
doubt [/center][/quote] Thank you very much! |
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love your poems guys 
Jan, I love your image and poem as well 
thanks for the welcome, CD but I have been a member since 2005, I just don’t post often…I visit hte site almost every day though 
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
